Finishing Up Chapter 1 (Patreon)

I'm pretty much done now. I'm still tweaking a few things - as you can see I've redone the whole bottom segment of this page (38). This was the most major change I made (along with the removal page 39 altogether) - mostly the edits are smaller details that no one but me will notice, but they help keep the world and narrative consistent. In this case, I just didn't feel right about this scene. It felt weird and when I stepped back and looked at the whole, it really added almost nothing to the story. 

The chapter will be 48 pages when all is said and done. I still need to finish the website but that shouldn't take long since it's so simple.

I started this comic... too long ago, and some of the old art honestly makes me cringe a little. I know you're not supposed to go back and change stuff in comics or you'll never finish them, so I'll do my best to abstain, but there are a couple frames that just make me wince to look at and I'm embarassed to release them now. I'm hoping people will be willing to overlook them in favor of the story, and of course, the art from here on out will be as good or better as the best panels of this chapter. 

 Thank you all so much for sticking around this long. I know I work slow and don't update enough. But I really appreciate your support. Look forward to new stuff soon.