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Actual rescue party: part 3.1 (Patreon)

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2022-11-14 20:21:05
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2026-06
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And now it's Iris' time to shine!

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This week there are 3 more images to the actual rescue party storyline (one of which is the WIP I shared 2 weeks ago). I am actually starting to regret doing a complex interior scene. That shit takes forever and just doesn't look as good as basic outdoor desert/wasteland or underwater stuff. 

I am also working on the next part to Marine Biology, and I am planning to continue with Slugworm trouble. Regarding slugworm trouble, I am considering changing the monster back from the slugs they are now, to the headcrab like critters they were for the commission (half spider half headcrab, maybe 'spidercrab'?). Those are much cooler and fit the sequence and environment better. 

Anyway, I hope you enjoy this little update and as always, images are in the archive.

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silvarknite

Oh wow! Her butt looks so good! Yeah the backgrounds are so complex, but it makes for a fun environment for the action!

Narita

You know, I half expected the spider to 180 no scope the other girl. It would have been ridiculous and I am glad you opted to have it progress in a more logical sense.

Mulekick83

Sure go ahead and change them, although I think you should keep the transparent bodies as seeing the eggs in those worms was an amazing detail :)

Habanero

Never turn your back to the enemy! What are they teaching you in that monster hunter academy anyway?! I'm sure the interiors are a pain to draw and you'd rather be drawing something sexier, but I do think it adds a lot to the action. It makes it feel all the more claustrophobic.

Grave

Iris has got one hell of an ass, and if she were a few seconds faster she might have been able to prevent what comes next. But sadly, her friend is already knocked up and the Alpha spider has laid out quite a subtle trap for her.

tsk92

I wonder how many tiles Iris will last before being overwhelmed. I would say that rather than change the slug worms mid way through, perhaps the headcrab is a a separate/stronger scavenger species that found itself some easy prey?

NEONGRIMCROSS

That Alpha spider's playing chess while these hunters are playing checkers.

Venabili

For me personally, I am fine with more generic environments. I would rather have more pages than more detailed pages. Edit: I enjoy detail when it comes to the monsters or the girls.

Mrorome

I think the headcrabs are a great idea, but for a separate storyline. Slugworms have their thing, but a headcrab type critter could bring something entirely new! A mind control zombie-like scenario for the headcrab taking over the girl and leading her to a breeding ground, or simply clamping down on her head and neck tightly enough to not need any sticky slime to overwhelm his prey! Possibilities are endless, but I think it warrants an entire new series somewhere in the future :3

James Gavin

This continues to be a fantastic series. I love Iris' outfit and I'm pleased to see she's already managed to get a least a little bit tangled in that webbing.

DvD

Love it, as always

KmNk218

For the Marine Biology story have you decided if it's going to have a Bad Ending? I feel that Liz being a twisted scientist would benefit more from a kinky ending where she often visits the squid for "research purposes".

ImportantQuestionAsker Iyfdgrs

Im really hopeing, despite her poor start, Iris puts up a bit of a fight. After all ot can't be all sunshine and raidbows for the eight-legged hero. At best, partial victory, like succesful egg layong session, ended with prey's escape or counterattack would be most intresting developement of events. After all, spider can't go on forever and it would propably, eventually have to back away due to exhausion leaving only partialy restrained, half full of eggs and still fighting back "prey" to scramble away and prepare for round two :3

Sacs19

A spider disappearing after you turn you back at it? hell, just like the ones that shows up at home. About the background... have a broad shot with a detailed background to give the general idea of the place, then go for a more basic one when doing the rest of the comic? Speaking for myself, when it comes down to comic specially adult comics, the background isn't something i am used to pay much attention. Anyways, outstanding work as always man.

eagle5

Wow, if Liz were to trip and stumble, she might faceplant right in her friend's, umm, business.

From Beyond

I'd love to see her getting wrapped up in meat walls

~Robin

The Alpha looks so mischievous and cute in that little cut away on the second picture lol. But I'm sure he's thinking "ohh two for the price of one".

Jules

I hear where you're coming from with the interiors, but i LOVE how it lends itself to really unique positions like the girl in the shower. I hope you can find ways to integrate interesting set pieces in the other environments!

D0gbert

Spider boi be like OH SHI~

Kwisatz Haderach

Are the spiders using ovipositors to lay eggs inside the hosts or do they actually fertilize the hosts’ own eggs? Kinda curious about the biology here.

zeroGravitas
>>95655395

They lay tiny already fertilized eggs. They don't actually need humans as hosts and can actually lay eggs anywhere, but the alpha is certainy developing a taste for it. Spiderlings hatching from eggs implanted in mammals do appear to come out a bit more mature than those implanted in lesser critters/other insects or just dropped on the ground.

Hedrah
>>95655395

The girl's wombs offer a better protection as they have a constant regulated body-temperature, always keeping the environment the eggs are in moisturized and self-adjusting for the volume. So the eggs don't need to waste energy to harden the egg "shell" to protect itself and the growing spiderlings don't have to spend nutrients to try and keep themselves protected from the shifting temperatures, all they have to do is focus on growing and maturing properly.

Esky

Awesome work as always!!!

Habanero

After looking at these new pages a bit, I want to offer a bit of constructive criticism for page 19. I really think Iris' facial expression and body language just seems way too relaxed. She doesn't really give off a sense of urgency. It's not really an expression that says "Oh my god, my best friend just got bound, brutally raped, and impregnated! And it's coming for me next!!" It looks more like "Ah geez, now I've got a big mess to clean up... Oh well, I'll take care of it." Especially after her great expression on page 18, it really seems like she should have a much more panicked expression as she desperately reaches for the gun, then whips around, ready to fight for her life.

hdctbpal
>>95653066

I like that he made sure to finish up leaving that sticky creampie in shower girl even as Iris watched though.

zeroGravitas
>>95682536

after going back and having another look at page 19, I think you might have a point. she doesn't seem concerned enough, especially in the large panel. I should probably address that

Habakuck

I really like the detail, that Iris accidentally steps on the spiderweb. This gives a good Idea, what's going to happen next. You've got a really good manner to trigger the imagination. One get way more from you than excellently drawn pictures. Thanks for it.

Josh Foster
>>95682536

I didn't get the impression that Iris was relaxed in page 19. She seemed panicked until she had a weapon, then she was "all business" with her training kicking in. These ladies are probably trained in the use of firearms and know that once you have your finger on the trigger, you must be calm/focused. (So I don't mind page 19 facial expressions -- just another viewpoint from another fan)

Summoner

I enjoyed the bit of extra detail of the penetration in 18, though always nice to see the character's expression at the same time which is out of the frame here. Would love to see extra details there develop, maybe a peek of inner lips around the penetration at some point. But looking good :)

joeyjoejoeshabidoo

If you want to simplify the backgrounds in future I don't think anyone would mind. I'd personally prefer it over more stories taking place in a barren wasteland where there isn't much room for creative encounters. I mean how many stories have we had where the monster emerges from the ground?

Eskim0

I’m enjoying seeing this play out. The rescue party will soon need rescuing. The spider is like send more girls. The art is excellent as usual. It feels more widescreen cinematic than just reading a comic. The shot of then vehicle then the girls inside driving. The follow up to rescue party following from pest control. That first pic from Rescue Party with the girls patrolling. No dialogue but none is needed. I’m hooked

Plus Huang

Here are some thoughts since I still using pixiv: How about make a nest like background while constraint heroine's posture, maybe all cocooned but still consciousness to be played