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So it begins...

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All the basic elements of the story are here: Evie, the monster, the environment, the slime. I might refine the backgrounds a bit, since these are quite rough in places, but in general, this is the look I am going for. 

The main antagonist is a snow lizard (page 4, name might change if i can come up with something better). It's another slime spitter, with strong jaws, excellent for biting. It is fat and slow, definitely not a nimble fighter. It prefers to let its slime do the work. The snow lizard is a solitary creature and generally doesn't tolerate the presence of other living things nearby. 

The snow lizard already slimed one critter today, it has no problem sliming another. 

The narrative will generally follow the original big game hunting (until page 7 at least), but I will make minor changes to the story here and there, hopefully for the better.

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And the next bit to marine biology will come in a few days.

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RadRanger

Let's hope the slime would keep her warm in the cold... know what I mean. 🤭

Phil

Phenomenal, what a hottie. I guess the harsh icy tundra resolved the clothing dilemma. The oozed out carcass of the "whatever that thing is" on panel 1 does give me some concern. I hope our hero is cautious!

MetroM4

Part of me is hoping that after she's slimed she'll get swallowed up by the lizard. Since she's way smaller than the previous, unfortunate creature she just past.

Grizzly Gus

Oh nice, I like that outfit you decided on

Abysspool

Great job. I like that you set it in a colder environment.

Mergo Aran

I like the heels being maintained to a certain level in this outfit. She really looks pretty good here.

Haeniel

Wow, amazing! You really did an awesome job on this one. Also happy (incoming) new years

USER

I hope this time it doesn't end with being eaten

CIABillWilson

Rip, preferred the original outfit but if this it the way you wanna go then i still support your choice. can't please everybody

Matt (not that one)

Once again, your attention to detail is really on point here. From the confidence in Evie's stride to the frames where you can see her breath (and the red nose), this is all really excellent work!

Josh Foster

Looking top notch, as usual. I wonder if the first track of prints should be larger, though. This animal looks BIG.

Josh Foster

Not sure Evie can handle it. But that's why I'm here. ;)

Stanley Richmond

I'm fascinated by the defeated beast trapped in the slime, mainly because it's evidence that at least some of these creatures do, in fact, interact with each other. Makes me wonder about the fauna: is this evidence of a failed mating? Two creatures fighting over territory? Are they part of the same species? Also, the slimed creature is damn huge. Where's Evie's rocket launcher?

Arcturus

The sense of scale conveyed here is really impressive

Cuess Air

Damn. You're rendering is just getting better each time. Will you share your process one day? I mean we can pay for tutorials of course.

Habanero

Oh... Oh my 😳 That monster looks incredible! It really gives off an air of a dangerous, lumbering beast, ready to fuck up all who mess with it. Definitely some of your best work already. Super excited for both endings!

Orgasmatron Prime

I'm disappointed this design won out. Do people not know what sort of Patreon this is? It's NSFW!

James Gavin

The outfit design works, but I am looking forward to seeing more of Evie.

Desiree

That's going to be one large creature to take down. Not sure a smg will do!

From Beyond

It's beautiful! A perfect gift for a new year. Thanks :D

Habanero

If I had to nitpick, I think the first panel of page 2 could use a little more work. Evie's proportions are pretty wonky; her waist is way too skinny, her boobs are too big, and her spine is bent in a weird way... Every other panel looks great.

Habakuck

That looks very promising and I look forward for the story changes. Just an Idea: Soldiers use flash or smoke grenades to get an advantage in difficult situations...

Test

Please no death or injury for our intrepid hero! :)

Valaska

Gosh damn, a redux to wash the sins of the past haha. Look forward to it!

Clcskylands

hey zero G do you think you'll ever finish gastropod ambush?

Sacs19

looking at these pages, its pretty amazing to see how much you drawings improved since i first saw them on the pixiv specially the detail on the clothes/weapon and the lights, congrats man

zeroGravitas

Thanks man! That's so nice to hear. But yeah I feel I slowly am getting better at this stuff. Still have a long way to go though.