Chapter 1 of a possible new story. (Patreon)

I want you to read this story and comment me your thoughts! Also the original story name is.: Let blood rain upon our enemies (I am open to alternative names to this story)

It is post ww1 story btw

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1k8W31TqHnEAGDzRf5EOvFbyve7Fm_JiTp5-nG1uHlVU/edit?usp=sharing