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megamoon

Is this transformation or head swap ?

megamoon

Ok sad face was really hoping it was a head swap, but oh well.

GreenTG

Nothing’s stopping you from using your imagination and picturing it as a head swap — especially since it kind of looks like one.

megamoon

Ya I no that's why it was sad darn it, this could be a head swap. I know I keep hoping for a head swap story the ones that you do do are pretty good. But i'm also guessing they're not super popular and a little bit harder for you to write is what I would guess.

GreenTG

I mean, for example, I don’t see much difference whether it’s a transformation or something else, as long as it’s not an actual head swap — if the head and face stay the same (like in this example or many others where you say you want a head swap). The point is basically the same: a head swap keeps the face, and a transformation can also keep the face, so why focus so much on the head swap part?

megamoon

Because there's a lot you don' get as far as a narrative, as far as a storytelling vs just a transformation there's still that acknowledgment of the person that they are. Even if they have lost a good portion of it they still have that piece of themselves that small piece in a physical sense. Its a whole different layer of storytelling, you don't get with just normal transformations.

GreenTG

Yeah. What’s the difference between a transformation where you still have the same face and head you had before, and a head swap? On the outside, they look like the same people. A person looks in the mirror and sees their own face.

megamoon

Will they still have their own voice again this does depend on the story. I guess it is a matter of perspective too I won't deny that the way I look at it, it's a partial transformation, not a full transformation. Even if they do have a female body, they keep that one little piece of themselves. Where there's that level of a different type of paranoia, in a way again, depending on the story of course. Like, let's take the last headswap store you wrote with the head swapped mail right. If that had just been a transformation, story it would have been annoying, of course, but. There wouldn't been those character interactions like the males, irritation wouldn't have really made sense. Because there's always that little back excuse you can say well i have the face of a woman, so it doesn't matter or the makeup wouldn't even be necessary. There's a lot of those interesting type of character interactions.You just don't get with a full transformation story. At least that's the way I look at it now. Yes, again, as I said, this really does depend on the story itself of course. On top of that you have a whole lot of just different options that just don't really work in a transformation story, because a lot of those problems indirectly get solved with the transformation itself. For example boys on a way to a family meeting with his girlfriend him turning into a girl and him being head swapped with his girlfriend. Those are two different stories. Even though technically you could argue well isn't that the same thing? Well, no, you'd have a completely different narrative there. Just as one example does that make sense ?

GreenTG

"Because there's always that little back excuse you can say well i have the face of a woman, so it doesn't matter or the makeup wouldn't even be necessary." You know, in the real world, a “girl’s face” or a “guy’s face” is a pretty loose concept. There are plenty of girls who have a “boyish face,” and lots of guys who have a “girlish face.” Plus, so much depends on makeup and all that. Basically, in my opinion, only about half of all girls actually have what you’d call a “girl’s face.” =)

megamoon

I guess that's true but i still think there's a level of difference between those two type of stories. And yes it does depend on the face.I mean, again, let's talk about the last headswap Story you wrote. There's a level of tensity that wouldn't have been there because the character still is a masculine voice and still has a masculine face. Something that really wouldn't have been there if it had just been a straight transformation story. Some things would have been the same sure, but not everything they're just certain narratives, you can't really do with a transformation story that you can do with a head swap story specifically with character interactions. And yeah it may not mean something the everything I just think you can be a lot more creative with headsw vs just straight up transformation. Overall if that makes sense

GreenTG

Okay. I think I understand. I have one request, please — and don’t take it the wrong way. It’s just that sometimes your comments like “it’s a shame this isn’t a headswap” or “is this one about a headswap or not?” come across as if you’re trying to push me into making the kind of content you want. I think I’ve already mentioned this before, and I might be repeating myself, but I honestly don’t know how else to say it more diplomatically. It’s just… I don’t even know how to put it — just think about it, okay? I’m going through a rough time right now, and I’m honestly on the edge — either of giving up on life or giving up on creating altogether. So… sometimes, after reading your disappointed comments, I just… I don’t even know. Like, imagine you’re selling soda in different flavors, and you’ve got a hundred customers, but there’s this one person who keeps coming up and asking: “Is this one lavender-flavored? What about this one? And that one? Oh, what a pity your soda isn’t lavender-flavored — I just love lavender soda.” And they keep doing that over and over again, even though you already know they love lavender, but they still remind you of it every single time.

megamoon

Ok first off, I do apologize Um, it's not meant to come off like that. Please understand i've read a lot, and when I say this, I mean a lot of transformation style of stories. Body swap stories the list is massive sooo i guess the way I look at head swap. I can't help but think, oh I wonder where they're gonna take this. And the other half of that is well to be blunt, even if any of them aren't finished. The head swap stories you have made are really good so it's also that too. But I can completely understand how it can come off like that.It wasn't meant to. I have no desire to hurt your feelings and as someone not, that's an amateur array themselves, I personally. To crave that feedback, but then again, i've only posted a couple stories online, so I can understand it's a very different take. So again I do apologize for it sounding like i'm trying to push you to write that type of content. I mean yeah i'm not gonna lie when you make a head swap story, i'm happy about it, but it's not like Im. Raging in my seat going?Oh how dare they not make a head swap story because I want one, it's more of. Oh, so this is a head swap story. Okay, well, what did they do with this? Let's see where it goes. I mean some of the best stories i've red like lily for example and the story about that wife and husband that body swapped. Really interesting concepts and you took them in a very good direction.I love the chemistry between the characters. But again, I guess it could come off like that, it's not meant to it's more of you know.I look at the image and I go oh, is this a head swap story. But again I cen see if you're not in the best of mindsets, how it can come off like that.So for that, I do apologize sincerely. I don't comment a lot on da mainly because the stuff is hard to read and i can only really do it when i'm at home, so there's that. And i've been plenty busy with my own writing and internet issues. But that's our hearing or there so again i do apologize if my comments came off as colder callous, it wasn't meant to. I think you're a very talented writer so I'll try to be a little bit more sensitive to that and again.I do apologize for hurting your feelings if I did.

GreenTG

Thank you. And once again, about the comments — I really do love reading them, I love talking and discussing things, it truly gives me a lot of motivation. But there’s a difference between comments that talk about the story itself and the same kind of comments over and over again when… well, you know what I mean.

megamoon

Ya and again honestly it's just the image that was the reason I asked that. And I am sorry for that It's not meant to hurt your feelings or anything. My criticism is always meant to help it's never meant to hurt, and in this case it did. But, you know, if I had known you were in a bad seat of mine, I wouldn't have made that comment but. It's not like I knew you no so again, I do apologize, and I can completely understand. I'm sure the ring around the rosy with da and patreon isn't fun. I mean, if it's annoying to me, I can only imagine how frustrating it is for you. And I just didn't consider that my comments may hurt your feelings So I do apologize for that again.