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Eternal Yujin

This was a refreshing take on the whole "steal my virginity" bit. I'd completely forgotten about it, and then had a massive smile on my face once I realised. It's a really smart decision, because on the one hand, Rias really does care about Jiro... but on the other, it's an interesting way of getting out of snubbing the marriage, which you made us forget using the former.

SkyFall

Holy shit Rias is ruthless, she just set up her sister in law to take the biggest L in any of her fanfiction appearances. Ironic how Grayfia rudely busted through the previous barrier from Kaori and called it weak, now its payback lol

ytm

Looks like the bird (Grayfia) didn't see that window (Longinus powered barrier) until it was too late. We love to see it.

Zerak

You know had they gone to the buss it would have also worked as its magic stops people from noticing what goes on inside.

Helen of Boy

Taihou is continuing to grow and see value in more people than just her Commander! We love to see it!

Ebiris Fanfiction

It's been a tricky balancing act between keeping the funny yandere edge to her character and her being completely incapable of interacting nicely with other women. She's come a long way from sending fake messages to Akeno from Jiro's phone!

Metri Boomin

Just out of curiosity, is Jiro still fat, like a marshmellow, or is he musclular fat, like a sumo wrestler?

Ebiris Fanfiction

He's not really as big as a typical sumo wrestler, but he does have some actual muscle hidden underneath the surface layer of flab. Rias isn't being facetious when she talks about him having big strong arms!

Helen of Boy

It's been great to see her develop, yeah. Though now I'm kinda picturing a future where Taihou is accepting (even encouraging) of other girls joining in... except Aleno, who she remains precisely as jealous of. (Maybe I'll try my hand at an omake, when things get that far.)