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https://docs.google.com/document/d/1_Q3D8GA2Q7NYKgGunbeC7h5ae5R9O8RnzhvVUEYS-cU

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Zerak

What a shame. The bus is the best place to summon a new person.

Zerak

Patreon sucks. Posted the comment instead of doing a new line. I really think he should come clean to his dad. There is zero benefit from hiding the supernatural from him. And it would make his life easier.

Ebiris Fanfiction

Yeah, it's a funny joke how Issei's mom and dad completely dismiss and rationalise all the wacky devil stuff upending their lives, but that doesn't really play with Jiro's situation. It is coming, he's just being an awkward goober and putting off a difficult conversation.

Zerak

Honestly the financial security goes a long way to ease a lot of the issues.

Helen of Boy

I like the cut of Amasawa's jib! Also, the successful use of the bus. It's a testament to how much experience Jiro has now that just the thought of Rias and Akeno pressing against him isn't enough to cause a roll anymore.

RamblingMadness

I didn't look through all the comments in the post on QQ and see if this was answered, but did anyone realize that the minibus is removing their sexual inhibitions when they're in it? I remember there was phrasing like they'd been dumped in cold water after they got off from that initial orgy, but they haven't seemed to have made the connection. I guess it'd be gaming the system a little if the bus was involved more frequently anyway :P I'm really enjoying this so far, thank you for writing!

Ebiris Fanfiction

No one's figured it out yet. The cold night air and the shock of what they'd all done for the first time made the bucket of cold water feeling really prevalent after that time, but Yuuka/Taihou/Kaori didn't feel nearly as shocked after their mini-orgy, nor did Rias and Jiro think anything untoward over that fun road head exercise. Honestly if they ever do figure it out, it becomes kind of morally problematic to take advantage of, so better they stay innocent!