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ytm

Hopefully the book mentions the medicine for Ddraig's mental health. It gets so bad that he goes crazy and talks like a kid. Issei's real power is his ability to devastate his allies and enemies minds.

TheOchreKnight

I can tell you've had a lot of fun writing this chapter brother. As much as I had fun reading it. Being Ddraig truly is suffering. It's just so unimaginably over for him. They punish sinners in Hell less severely than this.

Helen of Boy

Who's laughing at the end? Everyone? I could see basically anyone other than Draig roaring with laughter after that actually works. Poor Draig. Poor Asia.

Ebiris Fanfiction

The 'bwahahaha' noise is meant to be sobbing not laughter, I might need a better onomatopoeia for that one though, since yeah it does work for laughter.

Helen of Boy

Maybe swap the W for a U and extend the As? Something like BUAAAAHAAAHAAAAAAH looks a bit more like sobbing, I think?