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Zerak

There is a roll missing in the chapter.

Ebiris Fanfiction

Can you elaborate on where? There was one at the end of the last chapter when Jiro got hard for Ravel, then he didn't get hard again after having sex with Ravel in this chapter, so there shouldn't be any place for one going by the usual rules.

Zerak

The BJ would reset it. I skim the lewd stuff, but I do count the rolls. So after she says it’s salty, the next activity should have a roll.

Ebiris Fanfiction

Precum isn't enough to reset the timer, it has to be a proper orgasm.

Zerak

Oh, didn’t realise that is what happened. As I said, I skim the lewd stuff. But that is weird. Why would he stop there? Eh, it’s fine I guess, I thought there was a missing roll.

Zerak

I just read that section, and you might want to make it more clear, as Yuuka says otherwise. Not clear at all if you didn’t add it in a comment here.

Ebiris Fanfiction

I've slightly reworded it so Yuuka calls it pre-cum rather than just cum, although lacking any other note of Jiro saying he's orgasmed or that he's gotten soft and needs to get hard again afterwards, it does feel like splitting hairs a bit.

Bob Saget

So, how many hot powerful women does that make it, who either had their first kiss with a boy by sucking Jiro's dick, or at least whose first kiss with Jiro specifically was sucking his dick? I only point this out because neither Jiro nor anyone else seems to have attempted to manufacture these "out of order" sexual happenings, but they keep happening anyway. Without diving into the text to check for everybody, I recall this happened for Kaori, Serafall, Tsubasa, Ravel, and Yuuka. A combo of "Summer Mirage", Jiro's ability incentivizing lewdness, and the setting's native ecchi/harem logic does explain it. But nonetheless it feels like someone should start keeping a tally so Jiro can get a 'Free Sundae!' or something after he does it X amount of times.

Ebiris Fanfiction

Add Raynare to the list, but yeah that about checks out! Taihou, Saeko, Rias, and Akeno are the only ones to have gotten a kiss first. Meanwhile Tomoe and Reya have given handjobs but kept their mouths out of it. And Mittelt had sex with him without any oral or kissing.