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Helen of Boy

Well, that's two bits intertwining, and perhaps the most obvious ones, at that. Now, to see how the mother gets involved in all of this... Yuuka's descriptions of her previous life continuing to baffle and/or worry everyone is a great bit. Kiba being entirely alone is a concerning change from canon, in terms of how he's doing. Pretty reasonable, but definitely something to be worried about. Hopefully, they find him before anything too serious happens... or, at least, before anything too *permanent* does.

Zerak

I know nothing about Blue Archive outside of this fic, and it sounds wild.

TheOchreKnight

Ah man, all this talk about Kivotos makes me wish another BA girl would show up, it would be straight gas

vodkasheep

Why can't he just use the throne to find them? I imagine finding things with a connection to the holy system should be fairly trivial for it.

Ebiris Fanfiction

The throne being omniscient kind of makes it impossible to write around. While it has access to the System's global settings, it otherwise relies on Jiro's own perception to do anything targeted (like he could look at Akeno or Nanael and see how they both showed up when they were in the room with him, but he can't look up Raynare from across town or Michael while he's in heaven).

ajansskssk

huh, id forgotten about that

ajansskssk

could he use it to reduce kokabiel's wings? could be fun!!

Bob Saget

Unless Kiba was rapidly kidnapped and secreted away, it feels like one or more of the characters who underwent the '1 year training' wiki pull (excluding ruin princess Rias) should be capable of finding him in relatively short order with some expression of magic/sensory technique bullshit. Some examples that seem plausible enough, if perhaps not strictly correct: Kaori using Kiba's hair/clothes/whatever in an impomptu sympathetic tracking spell or ritual, Yuuka mathematically defining something inherent to Kiba to identify his whereabouts, Jiro and Saeko rapidly canvassing the town with their ki sense. This casual approach of just walking slowly through town hoping to notice something amiss seems strange tonally given the defcon state Kokabiel's and the Old Satan Faction's activities have caused.

Ebiris Fanfiction

Jiro and Saeko are in separate groups to take advantage of their ki sensing (though they could be moving faster, yes). Koneko would be even more useful if she could use her senjutsu, but at least she has sharp senses in general. As far as Kaori and Yuuka go, I don't think they should be able to do something Rias didn't do with her own devil magic in this situation, which it certainly feels like it should be up for as she's his King. I'd expect Kiba is using his own magic to throw off tracking to some degree while he's in his stray arc. Ultimately I don't really want to make that kind of easy tracking... well, easy. If they find Kiba that way, it'd take five minutes to swing by Hell and grab something from Diodora's house so they can jump him too.