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Wiki x Wank 82 (Patreon)

Published:
2026-07-24 15:05:34
Imported:
2026-07

Content

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1kOonl59iEf4xe3vYTsf8ZXzHPd5XVJcRr8d2DGdyKJE

Comments

Eternal Yujin

Issei Hyoudou, modern day philosopher. 😭🤣

Ebiris Fanfiction

People are like, "Oh you should kill Issei, he shouldn't be in the story if it's about your character," but fuck that, I can't have my guy say those kinds of lines!

Zerak

You know between the chair and testing what it can do, and Kiba’s sad story, it wouldn’t be outlandish to check up on the souls of the departed and find out about one still living. But that would need to be later specially if the big secret comes out so he can act without worry using the chair.

Vgoldtime

I swear to God, issei how the fuck ???!! I barely have words to describe this boy only that I'm pretty sure that he sounded like he was on crack or something. Both kiba and issei deserve each other, just do the world a favor and gender bend kiba so issei gets his dream girl , sorry asia and tsubaki but they are made for each other.

TheOchreKnight

My boy Issei, truly shining. You know, I really like the guy at such times, when he actually does try and use his brain. Unfortunately it happens so rarely to him, even in fanfiction. Also Jiro's too much of a good guy to deal with character bloat that way, even if it would be convinient for you as an author brother Not gonna lie, I cannot wait to see the payoff chapters for this arc, it's gonna be so epic Big thanks for this one

Megamiaouh

"Tsubaki having served us our breakfast before allowing Aoko a quiet meal with her parents, such as they are." This should probably be "her parents, such as we are" since Jiro is thinking of Sona and himself. I liked Issei's "Boobs. Therefore I am." speech, at first I thought he'd go into how the Alraune made him appreciate Nanael and Asia more and that would help resolve their issues but this was better I think.

Bob Saget

Neat chapter with lots of good points and solid ground covered. Feedback on the new "Dark Matter" ability, since it's kind of vague. The "can be mixed together on a {molecular} level" and "cream combine[d] at the {atomic} level" don't quite match up. And then the "Got a whole bunch of magic swords, just fuse ‘em together!" in the author's note suggests that the ability works more on a /conceptual/ level, considering magic swords have things like enchantments, ideations, and meta-materials baked into them that supposedly can't be mixed as simply as melting and alloying mundane metal. So maybe shift the original description to something more like 'mixed together fundamentally', 'metaphysically', 'abstractly', etc., since it doesn't seem the ability is necessarily constrained by scientific principles or logic.

Ebiris Fanfiction

Part of the pancake slurry turning out so bad is it was his first attempt, and power 9 didn't really give him a great deal of skill. There is some level of user control in how things merge so it gives Jiro something to practice and experiment with rather than being a black box. I took the molecular terminology from the wiki, but it's Taimanin, so you know how that goes. It's pseudo-scientific rather than if it was a Fate ability where they'd ram in words like conceptual everywhere.

Helen of Boy

I think that's the most directly obvious power up to someone's basic abilities yet. Usually it's a little out of left field, or comes about through training or expanding options or whatnot. But just straight up "the thing you're good at you're now better at" is a first, I think? Also, yeah, poor Phenex brothers. They're going to be so confused about what they did, and probably assume that she's mad Riser lost her to a human. But for some reason, whenever they bring up how hard it must be working for someone like that, she gets more annoyed? Girls are just so confusing.

Bob Saget

Maybe just change the power description from 'molecular' to 'atomic' then? Nothing wrong with lifting the verbiage from the wiki in principle. But the presentation doesn't quite work in this instance. Since, generally, affecting matter atomically is much more difficult and significant than affecting it molecularly. So it reads like Jiro somehow immediately jailbreaks/improves the ability moments after receiving it. Which is confusing.

Layout

Issei Hyoudou - The Philosopher Dragon God Emperor... also not not sure how I missed the whole, the kid is no longer in same room whilst I am groping her new new mother... aunt?

ajansskssk

wait, can he fuse the excaliburs????