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Vgoldtime

Well that was emotionally exhausting to read , kinda sad that akemi didn't get more shit thrown at her , her somehow blaming the dad for whatever stupid reason she come up with really made me wish jiro rightfully called her out on but the whole supernatural experience and the reminder of how utterly fragile her life is and how powerless she is in the face of the inevitable is also good too. Go on jiro go get that sweet loving from your harem to make up for dealing with that bitch . Justice for milltet and the nuns !!!! Fuck diodora with a rusty baseball bat in whatever afterlife he is in.

Helen of Boy

Even if only in a far-off epilogue, I hope Yuuki and Natsume do get the chance to meet Jiro properly. Probably once they're old enough to understand the situation a little more and make the decision about doing so for themselves rather than as extensions of their mother. I do actually feel slightly bad for Akemi (emphasis on SLIGHT). It's very possible to get together with someone and think you'll be happy and wind up miserable for reasons that aren't anyone's fault, with a person that loves you and isn't abusive and still can't ever make you happy. I can even see why someone might find it hard to reconnect with a kid and explain that to them, certainly before adulthood. BUT that doesn't excuse thirteen years of no contact with your child WHILE THEY'RE A CHILD and ESPECIALLY not then waltzing in like he should be happy to see you (even if he never saw that). I hope she at least manages to be present for her newer kids all the way through their lives... although given how she was acting at first, I could see her being the kind of parent that gets kids going no contact anyway when they finally can. Which'd be an ironic twist, especially in a world where Jiro never got famous, if her "better" children wound up ditching her in turn because she still failed them. Hopefully she's doing better than that, for the kids' sakes, but they're definitely young enough for things to not be obvious yet. EDIT: Also, Jiro passing Ophis off to Aoko was just delightful. Especially the proud papa moment of "Yup, she just took Ophis' hand without thinking, THAT'S MY GIRL!"

Abensur

I am sad he didn’t get to fucking let her have it but this was a very mature and satisfying way to end things nonetheless. Now to wait for one of his half siblings to awaken a sacred gear so he’s forced to take care of them too despite still disliking his mother

Layout

how many old satans are left? then there is the khaos brigade... and... Hopefully he can figure out multi dimensional travel... that would be fun.

Bob Saget

Typed a big comment, but I guess patreon either ate it or it's 'hidden'.

Ebiris Fanfiction

Yeah, I have turned off auto-moderation but that setting doesn't seem to actually do anything. I guess one F-word is enough to trigger it?

Doctor Universe

I'm kinda of in a similar family situation as Jiro and wouldn't give up my half siblings for anything. The rest of the family is way more complicated and painful but it isn't the kids fault even if it felt like it was at the time.

Dylan

Nailed tying off the Mom Plot.