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TheOchreKnight

Ye this was 100% awesome. I really liked how Jiro managed to steer things reasonably. My man really has a good head on his shoulders.

Vgoldtime

And to think he did all this with akeno in his lap respect my man. Raynare still a simp though.

Helen of Boy

I think it's really sweet that Gabriel knows who Raynare is, without prompting, especially when her own (former?) faction leader has no clue. Helps sell her as being genuine, as I don't imagine she looked her up specifically for this (although I suppose her presence in Kuoh with Nanael may have acted as a refresher anyway). Also, holy shit, yeah, Akeno really is the New Peace made manifest, isn't she? This is the kind of thing that feels like it could be the capstone of a story, or close to it, but I hope things continue carrying on from here so we can see how things develop (and how much of the rest of the plot gets increasingly derailed). ...sliiightly concerned that Charlemagne may make herself more present in the main plot at some point, rather than sticking to the middle school stuff. After all, if you want to bring God back, the person that can summon and utilize His Throne seems like he might factor into things a wee bit.

David Bray

i hope gabriel stays in kuoh and eventually joins the harem

Bob Saget

"She’s a half fallen angel half human who turned into a devil and then became unfallen. She’s as good a poster girl as you could want for this kind of thing." Akeno being some sweaty nerd's super speshul OC: "She'll be half-human, half-fallen, half-devil, half-angel." "Bro you can't just make her two people's worth of races so she technically qualifies for every Abrahamic faction." "Nuh-uh, I'll just lampshade it by making her wings asymmetrical and giving her two people's worth of boobs."

Bob Saget

On the subject of recently former Fallen vouching for their Fallen brethren minutes after converting back into full Angels again. A simple solution that doesn't involve making second class angels is just mandating a 1-month (or some other length of time) 'adjustment' period before they can suggest their buddies. In practical terms, to give them time to Fall again if they're actually rotten. In more diplomatic terms, so they can make recommendations with a clearer head after the emotional and spiritual shock of returning to grace has had time to fade.

Zerak

I think you forgot the rule that all half fallen would get a second chance right away since they never had a first chance.

Einar Strandberg

Really well handled conversation. I'm looking forward to the discussion with Michael about all of the bugs in the system.

Bob Saget

I do have to wonder what percentage of Fallen will prove to be nigh-irredeemable. That either won't have any 'real' angel vouch for them or who will swiftly Fall again. I'm guessing a lot of that demographic are going to end up either weakened and isolated or murdered. The 'two' remaining factions aren't going to want incorrigible violent troublemakers around, for the most part (looking at you Koko). On a similar note, while I believe Azazel is open minded enough to turn over a new leaf if he can still have lots of sex. I'd guess that part of the reason he didn't immediately sign up to un-Fall was so that he could extract the last of the value possible from the various unethical projects he's running. Something like: "Whelp, better hurry and put these half-lobotomized humans out of their misery after I finish stealing the last of their sacred gears. Daddy can't be murdering lab rooms full of innocents after his wings get laundered."