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Bob Saget

I believe 'anything with circles' includes all of Merlinean magic as a starting point. Due to the prevalence of spell circles in DxD. A lot of devil magic as well. So even without inventing her own tricks Yuuka can copycat lots of characters repetoires as needed. For the meat of the chapter, I would've preferred "and the conversation didn't go well because [summary]" rather than reading the whole thing. I was particularly uninterested in the elder and younger shido's dialogue, considering their non-importance, unlikeability, and the temporary nature of this setting.

Vgoldtime

The sheer arrogance to try and blackmail a genuine supernatural entity is hilarious and mildly infuriating.

Zerak

Ngl, this chapter was super disappointing. The whole multiple timelines kills any interest I have in the other worlds since they aren’t the worlds the girls are from. The discrepancy could have easily been addressed in this case by being the same time, but one got pulled the moment she was about to die. I was looking forward to seeing Saeko’s group as she knows them, not a random world she has no connection to. It ruins the appeal of going to those worlds for me. At least part of it. This chapter killed the enthusiasm I had for them meeting people from their worlds, since thy won’t be from their worlds, just a different version of them. Which just isn’t the same. Alternate timeline for Aoko makes sense. But for the other worlds a single timeline (his power accesses) would be better, unless it’s something like fate where there are multiple timelines, then it’s just one iteration of each timeline. I’ll be taking a break from the story as this just sapped a lot of my investment in it, might come back later and see what happens.