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(Dialog Preview) Size Invitation (English) (Blender) (Patreon)

Published:
2023-01-08 23:22:06
Edited:
2023-01-08 23:24:12
Imported:
2026-06
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(Español)Buenas a todosAquí les dejo las versiones con diálogos de la previsualización del comic que estoy haciendoContraté a un amigo para que me hiciera los diálogos y en mi punto de vista quedaron muy bien (Sobre todo las escenas eróticas 7w7)Si eres un fan de la lectura puede que te guste muchoEspero que lo disfrutenLa versión en español la publicaré cuando el cómic esté terminado (English)Good morning everyoneHere I leave the versions with dialogues of the preview of the comic that I am doingI hired a friend to do the dialogues for me and in my point of view they turned out very well (Especially the erotic scenes 7w7)If you are a fan of reading you may like it a lotI hope you enjoy

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Darren van der Valk

I fancy myself a reader and let me say that this was excellent. In particular, I loved the descriptors of the size differential as they vividly paint the accompanying imagery in such a way that it comes to life. Each image taking on a story of its own as the scene feels much larger than the confines of its' borders. They gently guide the viewer by further strengthening the conceived notion that was built upon by your wonderful scene building. I believe the strength of ones' writing can be judged by its ability to standalone. Had I only the words to read, I'd have pictured exactly what you had illustrated. If I had to pick a particular line: "Not even closing his eyes could make it disappear." There's something so intricately powerful about this. It alone, demonstrates the magnitude that is 'Emi', she's everywhere and everything. With me additionally appreciating the subtler things such as the words "wet" being used in the same line as "climax" and "escape" in the same passage as "shackle". Some clever tie-ins that play into each other. With the overall narration of their 'unfeelingness' being inversed as she looks to him as he did to her. It was a truly suitable 'finish'. Otherwise, I noticed that some of the gendered language appears incorrect. Such as using "him" instead of "her". Very minor and easily fixed up. Though it's such a small thing that I wouldn't worry about it. Most of the times gender is mentioned, it's in the right way. While the resolution doesn't appear to be the best, had to zoom a little to read the text which unfortunately degrades the image. I imagine it might have to do with the inclusion of the copy. Again, something minor, perhaps having a downloadable version in the future could help resolve this as I'm not sure if it's simply Patreon being unable to work with the sizing. Overall I enjoyed the story, it was certainly well written!~ ( ´ ω ` )