page 21 (Patreon)
Published:
2023-09-28 18:49:48
Imported:
2026-06
Content
Got a couple complaints that the previous scene transition was too fast and this boy's location is unclear. I'll try to do what i can to address this, I might need to dedicated a while page to physically walking the boy back outside the front gate and drawing a map so people know where we are. It just sucks, I wanted to get back to the dialogue and story. Lack of clarity in a comic is the devil.