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Atoll 50 (Patreon)

Published:
2017-04-30 15:37:47
Imported:
2026-06

Content

Can you believe Ive reached 5o pages??  Boss battle awaits.

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Feign

Compared to some webcomics, it's actually impressive that you kept the story moving well enough to get to the boss battle in only fifty pages. Most webcomics tend to bog down while the writer tries to figure out how to handle the reveal of the big bad.

Ratbat

I figure its mainly because I approached this story as a summary of events rather then a proper long form story. If it was a proper story I would have had several pages of naughty stuff, more conversations, more backstory. Honestly the negative side to this whole thing, is that most of the characters seem rather uninteresting because their story was just not developed. relationships between the machines seem arbitrary at best. But at most I only got 30 pages left in me. If that. What I need more are story's that can be told in smaller chunks. 12 pages ect.