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darlic

I'm not gonna lie, I was anticipating much more for the bed scene, but I guess we have to wait more before taking the action to the next level. The Parker scene was great though. Keep up the great work!

AVN Lover

I agree with what others have said, the bed scene was dissapointing. Especially after such a cliff hanger. Love your work WD, think you have two of the very best games! But that scene was short and instead we got a random Vera scene. I think most would have been happy with an entire episode dedicated to that scene... And I get that you wanna save stuff for later epsiodes but there is so much they coulda done...without even going all the way or half way.. Like talk about how hot it is what's happening, what MC and Chloe had done before to get him worked up... Dirty talk. Slowly exposing herself to Brody bit by bit. Mutual masterbation. JOI. Eventually a cumswap... Same goes for Parker scene date, it was great, but could have been even better with an entire episode, the dinner could have had dirty talk, public nudity, public mutual masterbation. A ton of things.... I was wondeirng why a random Vera scene when everyone wanted the Chloe scene.... Hope you don't take this the wrong way but will always be honest. Again just wanna emphasise I do think you are one of the best. Just a bit dissapointed this one...

AVN Lover

Sorry, don't mean to be negative... Love your work, and keep it up! You've just set the bar so high is all :)

Jwcscout72

It ended right after Chloe hopped in bed, that's where it ended last time, what's supposed to be new?

wilx

Overall another great chapter to a great series but I'll agree with the sentiment about the Chloe scene being too short for the build up. On the plus side, this adds another level of tension for future chapters.