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 Swelling Invasion Issue #3 - PAGE 15 REDO

The finished page is up!

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DM2099

Just wanted to say, I'm impressed by how you listened to all the feedback you got, and then followed up on it. Thank you for taking the time to redo this page.

Kenneth

This turned out great! Thank you so much again for all your efforts. And as has been said before really appreciate the redo. This renewed direction feels like Swelling Invasion at it's best!

Hana Chan

Super ultra sexy and I love everything about it. Just the bestest most wonderful page I could have imagined! You're awesome Monocle!! =D

Monocle

That second panel was inspired by the first big inflation of Miss Green from Sidney's Issue #1 :)

MarkyMarcus

Not gonna lie, when the discussion and voting was going on regarding a redo I was pretty on the fence. But seeing this new finished v2.0 page and comparing it to the old one I have to say I'm strongly and fully in the REDO camp now. This is a vast improvement over the water balloon bodies from before. So as others have said thank you for taking the time to get feedback and making the change. Great job!

Hana Chan

Hey Monocle. Bit of a silly request. But would you be open to posting the finished picture on this page? Not saying what you do isn't fine or that you need to stop linking to hentaifoundry as well but it just feels kind of empty to not see your final product posted in all it's glory on patreon but we see all the works-in-progress. If that makes any sense. >_>

Monocle

So for this first issue, I'll finish it and post a complete PDF copy here. Then next issue I'll start posting the completed pages here too along with HF. I'm also considering creating a separate web-comic site of my own to post completed pages there.