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Help me with some ideas for the creation of this Comic

The best ideas will be include in the script.

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You can check the previous chapters here:

Chapter #1

https://www.patreon.com/collection/52134

Chapter #2

https://www.patreon.com/collection/55285

Chapter #3

https://www.patreon.com/collection/963505

Chapter #4

https://www.patreon.com/collection/2274417?view=expanded

The main character will be Luna and secundary her office friends.

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Antiolemy

I'm short on character names but, the man on the left is barricading the door from the last issue. The Werewolf Ignacio breaks through part of the barricade, causing some of the crates to shred, Werewolf Elina scratches the man on the left. He says he is fine as he holds his wound, thinking it is a splinter from the broken crates. Just then the Ignacio and Elina break in the door. Then the Werewolf Nora sees Aurea, She smirks saying that she left her behind. Nora bites Aurea then tackles her and strips her clothing for pay back. Nora has sex with the Aurea as she transforms. The Man on the left begins to transform too, as he looks at Luna and his cock is revealed. Luna waves her breasts to distract him while the man on the right tries to hit him with a weapon but it doesn't hurt him. The Now transformed Man slashes the blonde man and he begins to transform. The man on the left bites Luna and has sex with her and turns her into a fearsome big breasted werewolf. Meanwhile the Man on the right transformed goes to the Waitresses from the end of Chapter 4.

s0nicx

Two potential things: 1. Luna ends up gaining two more sets of breasts from her transformation, the breeding instincts and pheromones effecting her far more than the others. 2. The comic ends with the group from the beginning of the 4th chapter having been overrun and the prosecutor (not sure of the name) finishing up being transformed showing how the city is doomed to fall to the werewolves.

Alexander Bertelli

Someone in the room either by mistake or in desperation sighns one of the documents making them a member of Aquas faith. Therefore gaining them the werewolf debuff instead of its usual intelligence debuff it normally gives. The others in the room are now at the mercy of the new wolf. Can anyone radio what happened in time?

Gornyetch

Just as a personal preference I'd like Kazuma to be the one who turns Luna, so here's an idea focusing mainly on Luna with some more general, alternate ideas in a separate comment. Picking up from Ch 4, the office workers successfully barricaded the door from Ignacio, Elina, and Nora. Luna and the others are trapped, trying to stay calm while they hear their turned friends attempt to break in. They're so focused on that, they don't notice Kazuma having snuck in (through a window or the roof?) using his thief skills. Undetected, Kazuma reveals himself by scratching/attacking Luna. Knowing she's already doomed, Luna tries to help her friends by keeping Kazuma's attention on her while they escape the way Kazuma came in. She rips open her blouse, calling for Kazuma to look at her breasts. Her plans works and Kazuma comes over and starts licking/sucking on Luna's breasts. Luna's transformation has started, and she starts getting aroused by Kazuma's efforts. The office workers then make a noise during their escape/do something that gets Kazuma's attention. Luna's new instincts are starting to take over, and she's disappointed Kazuma stopped. She tells herself it's to help her friends, and starts giving Kazuma a titjob to recapture his focus. During the titjob, Luna gets more and more aroused due to Kazuma's pheromones (her transformation advances during this). After Kazuma cums, she admits she doesn't care anymore about her friends/wants to spread this joy and uses her new werewolf strength to knock aside the barricade keeping Ignacio and girls back (who run after the escaping office workers) and presents her pussy to Kazuma so he can claim her as a mate. Kazuma starts fucking Luna from behind who completes her transformation. The last pages are some adventurers from the Succubus Shop having come to rescue the guild workers, who have already turned (or in the process of turning) after being caught by Ignacio/Elina/Nora.

Gornyetch

Some alternate ideas/thoughts: -Since Luna and group are barricaded in, maybe one of the turned adventurers could break open a path for Ignacio/Elina/Nora? Megumin or Wiz could blow open the door with their spells, or Aqua could cast buffs on the office worker werewolves to give them the strength to burst past the barricade. -Since werewolves can still speak, maybe the turned werewolves trick Luna and company? We could open a few hours later, with the groups still barricaded inside, and starting to go stir crazy when they get a message from Sena (the prosecutor; either in person or using the radio/broadcast equipment) saying knights from the kingdom have come to save them and it's safe to come out. When they do so, it's revealed Sena's already turned into a werewolf (a future chapter could cover her transformation in a flashback if you want to depict that separately).

Alexander Bertelli

Both are good ideas I will harp on if Megumi does get involved. It’s her tricking someone into sighting the papers. But I imagine she is busy hunting YunYun. That said for the clerks live by the paperwork wolf out by the paperwork.

Alexander Bertelli

Luna looks good as a blond and I hope she gets the matching gold pelt as opposed to the more common blue.

Alexander Bertelli

Question. Are the werewolves competing with each other to see who can turn the most people? I can see the man party competing over something like that. are the wolves uniting under the wolf goddes? Or are they all just feral agents of chaos focused on spreading the gift with an emphasis on people they know. Any answer or combination of answers is fine. Just thought for building plot devises.

Gornyetch

The wolves don't really seem to be competing in my perspective. I don't think anything we've seen so far locks the story into either chaos or uniting under Aqua as a wolf goddess. Kazuma, Darkness, and Wiz at least aren't operating on any plan (since post-turning they've either immediately gone after someone to turn or fucked). We saw Aqua break open the town gate to let in the pack that turned her, but whether that was a coordinated plan or just the werewolves running wild now that they have a source of buffs is unstated. We haven't seen Aqua directly talk to or command another werewolf, and we haven't seen Megumin yet (I assume she's being saved for Yunyun's chapter).

Gornyetch

Aqua's transformation spreading to her followers is an interesting idea. That could be used as an explanation for why there are enough werewolves to siege the town in the first place (e.g., the pack that turned Aqua/Megumin in Ch 1 didn't seem that large, so if the entire Axis Cult turned and rushed to Aqua's position that'd explain things).

Alexander Bertelli

I hope Megumi is being saved for YunYun too. But unless being a wolf gave her some sence. I would be disappointed if she were to cast more than one spell and be useless afterward. That means she needs to coordinate to be useful. The wolf that got aqua and Megumi is already smitherienes. I think aquas pack is her followers from the hot springs town. They got it when their goddes did that is why so many appears at once. But I could be wrong.

Locofuri@

Interesting ideas, this week i'll work the script