grievinglands

Expanding the Trial of the Goddess. (Patreon)

Published:

2025-08-12 10:18:32

Edited:

2026-01-16 09:36:36

Imported:

2026-06

Poll

Expanding the Trial of the Goddess.

Expand the Cyberpunk Past-put off the final mission at the compound until a bit later. 3
Keep things as they are. The story is fine as is. 10

Content

At the end of Book 5 and the start of Book 6, Gilgamesh enters an “echo of the past” during a Trial. I’ve worried this sequence might be underdeveloped and could use a few extra beats. This would include interacting with a few other "superheroes" and "villains." The trade-off is that expanding it could read like filler or over-explain the world, dulling some of its mystery. Also, it would detract a little from the fantasy setting that is the world of Gilgamesh. This poll is to hear your preference.