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Three Years Ago…

Deep within a dark and foreboding forest, where the gnarled fingers of trees twist toward the clutching clouds, strangling the light of the moon above, the air begins to distort and fizzle. A thunderous rumble shakes the forest floor, sending tremors through the earth. Creatures of various shapes and sizes scramble for safety, trampling over decayed auburn leaves and faded flowers, their frantic cries splitting the air as they flee.

Something is coming.

Where there was once only fog, the air begins to shift and shimmer. Sparks of crimson energy crackle and spit, cascading to the ground and igniting small flames that dance over the dry terrain. The scarlet hues bathe the area in their vibrant glow, casting an otherworldly light over the lifeless scene. A swirling vortex groans into existence, its epicenter radiating a blinding glow that pierces through the red haze. The strange magic spreads outward, touching the shattered branches and withered flora, saturating the forest with an unnatural energy.

From the strange portal, heavy boots stomp out the cinders crawling across the dirt. A figure emerges, silhouetted by the blinding light that spills into the darkness. He pauses, his movements deliberate and cautious, as his burning gaze sweeps across the unfamiliar surroundings. Though his features remain obscured, his eyes blaze like molten coals, cutting through the shadows with an unrelenting, bloody-red intensity.

“Where are we?” he mutters, his voice low and rough. His head tilts, sharp and alert, as more shapes flicker and materialize from the portal behind him. Turning slightly, he casts a glance over his shoulder at the shadowy figures taking form, their details cloaked in darkness save for the eerie glow of their eyes, each shimmering in different hues.

“Stay here,” he commands in a growl, the sound reverberating with quiet authority. “Ensure everyone makes it through.” Without waiting for a response, he steps forward. “I’ll get an idea of our surroundings.”

He strides into the murky forest with long, deliberate steps, his clawed hands swaying at his sides, the tapered obsidian tips grazing the dark fabric of his pants. Behind him, a long burgundy coat flows like liquid shadow, its frayed edges trailing as though once seared by flames in battles long past.

The forest closes around him as he weaves through twisted branches and skirts hollowed trunks. His boots crunch over brittle debris until he breaks through the treeline, stepping onto soft, manicured grass. He halts, his burning eyes narrowing as the moonlight finally reveals his face.

Pale and angular, his visage is both muscular and strikingly beautiful, framed by cascading waves of raven-black curls that scatter violently across his shoulders. For a moment, confusion flickers across his features as he stares ahead, taking in the sight before him.

An old and weathered manor stands against the horizon, its façade cracked and marred by the relentless passage of time.

“Well,” the being snarls, his lips curling into a wicked grin. “Looks like we’ve found something after all.”

The smile deepens, sharp and predatory, like a dagger slicing through flesh. His fangs glint as they peek from beneath his full, inviting lips, and his eyes darken, an ominous gleam flickering within their crimson depths.


Comments

Nymph

EEEEEE! I LOVE IT SO MUCH

Vanessa D Kelly

So amazing ! You write like a seasoned professional. Love this so much 💖

Megs

Omg...omg....Eeeeek excited fan girl scream....this is freaking amazing Jack. Freaking absolutely love it.

Goober

YESSSSS I LOVEEEE ITTTTT

Festering

Uhg. This imagery. The camera is at ground level, with the animals of the forest. We see several shadows flit across the screen as they scattered from the area. The camera does not pan up, for we now realize our POV is that of a native Draconian animal, and we are curiously watching as this being emerges, along with a slew of others. It seems to be observant and intelligent. So when they suddenly start to run, we run at their side, just outside of the path...but the newcomer is going to the decaying house of which none return..... The animal POV breaks away as the animal refuses to go near the manor. A new POV opens, pink lids flutter as we take in this strange sight. Who dares come near our home? We vibrate with alarm, realizing we are a rose upon the gate of the Manor of Mystery and something new is approaching.

Angel

I love the all of the in depth details! It makes me feel as if I am there experiencing everything that is happening! ❤️ Leaving us longing to know more... 🩷

Jeanie Williams

If I may say that I absolutely love the way your mind works.

Festering

Awww! ☺️ Thank you! 🫶

Denise Sieben

That was absolutely incredible. I could see and hear it all. You are truly an damazing author. Your writing gets better and better all the time.

Lisa Tucker

Wow Jack This is Amazing! I absolutely love it!! such details i see it so vivid in my mind!! Beautiful job !!

Chrizzy

Dude yes, like uggh you wanna become a script writer please ❤️

Chrizzy

Gawd the pictures you are able to paint with your words are just the most vivid and make your world even more real than it already is. Love everything about this ❤️

Marney Ironside

Wow reading this is like a movie playing out in my head.you really know how to describe things into life in our heads

Sparklyn

I am floored; this is incredible. I love how you weave in so many magnificent details, Jack. You are certainly proficient at composing vivid imagery 🌹