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another WIP! almost done! i need your help tho (Patreon)

Published:
2023-10-20 03:47:24
Imported:
2023-10
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wip

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heya'll! if you have time and are interested, could you check the writing on the board for typos and stuff? i'm currently very tired and will likely not be able to have much time to double check; i'll have some friends on this too, but the more pairs of eyes on this the merrier i'd say! Thank you <3

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GreedyTexan

Bottom left note for hera’s moobar thingy has a small typo, second paragraph. Other wise, OOOOOOOOOOOOOO

Sapphic Sapphire, the Silly Gay Sheep

Crossed out line of the horny streamer note under Marina (unless that's supposed to be intentional?), missing an apostrophe in "doesn't" in Behemoth's reclusive note, should be "a" instead of "an" in Behemoth's healthy outlet note, missing a p in apparently in Tammy's manager of the cowgirl bar note, missing an L in originally and an A in beautiful in Meredith's witch of the woods article, missing an F in affiliated and one too many Ls in powerful in Hera's "busty bombshell" article, missing an L in basically, a C in exceptionally, a C in occasional and a Y instead of an I in clumsiness in Hera's mayoral re-election article, a K instead of a C in necromancy, one extra S in trespassing and an extra charge of petty theft on Agatha's wanted poster (unless that last one was also intentional) and missing a D in withdrawal and "off" instead of "out of" in Agatha's "beast slays city guard" article. That's most of what I found, this piece rocks btw

Flashkannon

Jack off is two words. Also, for a more feminine version, jill off also exists