Slapstick Together Chapter 1 REBOOT (20) (Patreon)

pretty much stuck to the script while cleaning this page up, aside from a few dialogue touch ups!still absolute LOVE the "filling up your crash landing hole" gag panel, heheheBUT, i did add (in the second panel) a little bit of the pick-up line card peeking into the frame to somewhat sneakily imply Magna was trying to use a pick up line on him!if you've read the sketch pages (spoilers) she brings it up towards the end of the comic!i just love when little details like that pay off during a story