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World of Women - Cancelled? (Patreon)

Published:
2019-08-20 19:50:03
Edited:
2019-08-20 19:53:09
Imported:
2026-06

Poll

World of Women - Cancelled?

  • Keep Writing WoW 177
  • Pick Up one of the dropped/hiatus stories. (Like my rewrite of Midnight which increased the age and added more sex) 32
  • Start something new (not what was suggested). 17
  • Put it on a hiatus and take a break. (Someone always recommends this but it's just a fancy name for canceling. It's canceling.) 22
  • Try this new story I just suggested. 7
  • 2019-08-20
  • 255 votes
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Content

If it hasn't been clear by my continuous late releases and lack of early release chapters, my desire to write WoW has plummeted to nothing. All I receive these days is a constant stream of hatred, complaining about every decision I've made for this volume. This actually doesn't differ much from EVERY volume of WoW. I got the same shit for V1 and V2. But... after three volumes of WOW... followed by even me myself not having a terribly clear vision where I wanted to go, and it's actually been incredibly demoralizing to the point where I closed the comments section just to get a break from it. 

I'm assuming there are people who still like WoW and are reading it, This volume attempted some things. It was a story mostly about Clyburn getting a grip on his experiences from the last volume. Some of it worked. Some of it didn't work. 

That said, Volume 4 is actually going to jump about a year and a half in the future. He'll be 18 now, fresh out of high school, and he'll be assigned a sex agent. A lot of this volume will deal with his friction when it comes to him adapting to meet his quotas her desire to have him meet these quotas as a male "celebrity". For the first time, you'll see how Amaryllis truly sees men on the day to day basis. Meanwhile, there is a serial killer in Amaryllis killing off men one at a time. 

With EPASH acting as a buffer giving me some time, I think the volume will be pretty damn good. But... since all I get is hatred for WoW these days, what's the point of writing a V4 when noone reads past V3?

So... poll... do you want WoW... or should I drop it and focus on a new project? I've started a story about a guy teleported into an fantasy apocalypse as the god of biology, and with his mastery over life and living matter, he builds a fortress and begins to protect anyone who is willing to live under his rule. Since I constantly get crap for daring to write vulnerable characters, this will be more pure wish fulfillment, full of generic sex doll women and a guy whose a giant Mary Sue... just like you seem to want... 

P.S. I started WoW purely with the goal of writing a short 16 chapter volume. It turned to what it is PURELY based on support. There is, and never was, some grand plan for this story. As far as  i can say, the story I wanted to write more or less played out two volumes ago. 

Comments

mdspectre

I personally don't have a clue where all this 'hate' seems to be coming from. I've had issues with the MC before and have stated so. That does NOT mean 'I hate this story, I'm not reading it, whaaaa my pooty hurtz' haterz gonna hate, bro. Some chapters are good, some are not so good, others are just plain annoying but if they move the story along then themz the breaks. Shit happens for a reason, and so far with V3 coming to a close you've pretty much locked it all up so it actually works. Which is awesome since the MC of this story is a 50 year old man-baby with massive issues. I think that the MC becoming a functional human being (hopefully) by the end of V3 deals with all the nonsense. Its a good story. It made me choose to support you as a patron. Every story has its ups and downs( 3 act structure, anyone?). I might be jumping the gun here as V3 isn't finished, but I 'm actually looking forward to V4, which I was NOT with PoC since it got too weird and went lightspeed to plaid while the reader got the 'raspberry'. Well, you gotta do what you gotta do, I guess....Oh, one last thing. I don't do Discord. So if peeps are giving you grief about WoW and EPASH on friggin' Discord, then please do me a favor and tell them to go fornicate a freaky freight-train, courtesy of yours truly. Thanks : )

Seadrake

Tldr: Only great writers get such asshole critics. I honestly couldn't really read the third volume. The second was just too intense for me, even though I like the premise and think your writting illustrates the society exquisitely. Basing this off of most of your novels. I think your style of writing has allot of tension and intensity, which is awesome, especially at the end of volume 2. However it does make the series hard to read when there isn't a release to that built up tension. How do you solve that I don't know, and don't know if you'd even want to. Honestly I am incredibly jealous of your ability to build and maintain tension in your work. It makes people invest in your work. Its the reason people care to trash the characters. You've made everybody care for them and when they fail we get mad. Unfortunately the internet has taught us to response to anger and dissatisfaction is to be an asshole troll. My only wish is for the characters to win just slightly more sometimes, which is subjective as hell and a useless suggestion, and for there to be a decrease in tension every now and again. My cholesterol ridden diet can't handle it anymore.

Camilo Lopera

Just relax, is one of the best stories I have ever write... And don't worry if it was really bad nobody would comment... I have seen "writers" begging for comments.

Camilo Lopera

Even bad comments. They give enough importance to the story they take the time to comment and that is really hard to get.

Mu Hua

I don't think I can shill a revived Midnight King any harder

Mikss

Honestly WoW was a reason I become your patron. All characters except Clyburn are written really well and are feeling real to me (again except MC). I like how they have diffirent values and points of view. They want diffirent things and diffirent things are important for them. I dropped WoW only because I couldn't stand MC BUT I want to return to it maybe after you finish the Volume? And don't write an OP MC, internet is too full with them. I like your stories because your MCs and characters make mistakes, are sometimes wrong (MCs more often than other characters) and as Seadrake pointed out you are very good at building tension but sometimes it is too much. And as other pointed out as people are hating that means that they are invested in your characters. It is also nice that you in your works respond to comments and suggestions in your typical style: by showing us readers a tongue (the most recent example being in NTR Crush as you wrote Hakaru discusing with his girls only for both Maria and Akiko turning up with useless suggestions or not carring what he was saying) . Sometimes it is irritating but it shows a class and inteligence behind your work. Another nice point is that your characters are growing (some slower than others and some growing backwards by going one step forward and two steps back) and you don't make your MCs have a one big, glaring even, flaw that they are too obstinate to grow up from like it usually happens in asian ln/wn/manga/anime and in some western wn immitations. I vote for you to keep writing, maybe take some longer break to reset, find what you want from this novel or to just plan ahead. BUT ultimately it is your decision and you can't make everybody happy so no matter how will you write the haters will hate and they will be most vocal. Cheers and fight on. Thanks for your hard work.

Culkicoa

Hum... I may be speaking out of mys ass, but with how I see you as an author I feel like you should take some time to think of where you want the story to go, and at worst give it some closure over a next volume. You can always leave some loose ends and finish it as a potential first part of more, like you did with the "Tales of" serie. Anyways, I'm not reading it since end of 1vol, since I really didn't like the pov and general feel of the serie. But what I like in your stories is that the settings can be totally differents with very differents motivations and characters for the cast, while still having the whizzerlike narrative storytelling. Which is really enjoyable, and for this reason I think you should finish it (if you can of course), because some people may like wow in the same way I love ntr crush or tales of and I wouldn't like them to be cancelled.

Michael Melakis

World Of Women is my favorite novel you are currently writing. I Absolutely love what you’ve done with this world you created, and the dynamic of a world of mostly women and what that entails is masterful writing. I love the characters and I want more from them, I don’t care if the MC is frustrating sometimes because he is progressing as a character to a better place then where he was before (in vol 3 especially).

Will Stammers

Hey Whatsawhizzer, I am one of your loyal Lurkers. I am on the discord and patron. First thank you for your stories. I started following you from Volume 1 of WOW and have been enjoying the ride you have built. During the trolley explosion I was shocked wondering if you were going to kill of all my favourite characters; but I trusted you had a plan so I kept reading. My trust was justified and I found more depth then I could have hoped for in a random light novel I picked up because of its synopsis. The part that has me glued to my seat wanting more is how your characters grow, change, and develop over the story. Nothing makes me quit a series faster than a MC who doesn't change for events and goes back to doing the same things they did previously. So again thank you for bringing me MC with life and stories with depth and hope you do continue WOW as I look forward to reading it every time I see the post message on discord.

FailerQt

Do what you want to do. Every single one of your readers benefit from you being happy

Michael Melakis

as for why your getting more hate on WoW than other novels, it’s simply because people care about it so much more that everything else. People only complain about the things they care deeply about. Take game of thrones for example, you can’t fathom the amount of complaints that show received during the final season and it only received such complaints because Really cared about that show. WoW is only on a smaller and more personal scale than GoT.

Maximiliano Klinkert

As many others, WoW was the reason that I became a Patreon. It still is my favorite novel from you (though I admit that My Dungeon Life might take over if it keeps going like it is). Being concise, the premise is AMAZING and the MC needs some work but is fixable. As for the plot, Volume 1 was good but since it took place mainly in the mansion and didn't fleshed out the society, it is not my favorite. Volume 2 was amazing precisely because of the interactions of the MC with this society, I especially loved the school life moments and the whole contracts for the "slices". As for Volume 3.... I believe that the whole Demon Lord thing could have been better implemented. After seeing the new preview for Volume 4 i must say I am EXTREMELY EXCITED, it is exactly the direction I wished for. Thanks for writting one of the best WN I've read and I hope you continue to write more WoW.

J.D. Green

I enjoyed WoW for the most part. I just didnt like the direction it started going. I just got fed up with all the kidnappings. You would think with how importaint he was they would give him a real security detail. So I dropped after the beginning of vol 3. If you enjoy it continue writing. If not write something you enjoy.

Fallen North

So I have to admit I havent read the latest volume, but i really enhoyed the first two. I personally think you should keep writing it, but I also really want to read the rest of TOAE, as TOAS was what introduced me to your writing. Anyway Keep it up, and I appreciate what you do to add a little more lewd into the world ;)

Sergei Iakhnitskii

No! You can't stop WoW. It's like a drug-dealer says there is no more drugs for 5 y.o. addiction

Whatsawhizzer

My main take away from this is NO ONE is interested in my new story idea... I liked the idea of an apocalypse OP story. Why is no one interested in it?

cuibap

Silent reader here, I love all your 3 main stories, WoW, NTR and Enslaved sister harem. Are they all 100% tailored for my taste? No. Are there things I personally want to change in those 3? Many. But still I want you to have complete control over your creativity. Taking feedbacks is always important but don't try to cater to every complaints. The poll result speak for itself.Write to the best of your ability, stay true to your vision.

Drew Allan Coon

I voted to keep writing WoW, but you may want to discount my vote. I didn't vote because I'd prioritize it as a story over your other ideas, but rather because I don't think reacting to hate is the way to go. Some people just love to be outraged and will willfully ride the hate train just to keep their boner alive. Also, sometimes when you try something different, you're appealing to a different subset of your audience. Of course some of the audience react as if betrayed that your output doesn't cater to what they prioritize. But just because they're loud and passionate doesn't make their opinions more important than those that are willing to be surprised, or have a broader palate, or are just new fans. More than that, though, you should do what works for you. If the haters have indeed won, then yeah, move on. I'd still write it out of spite, but that's not necessarily what's good for you.

Angelo Stadter Pimenta Filho

Wow, i really like where the story is going actually. I can see where things got little erratic, but you got back into the game, so no complaints. If you want to take a break, do it, if you are afraid of people dont supporting, you can try to focus on RE:WOW? That can give you a new desire to write on world you created. That idea of the god and stuff, gross, not into the plot at all.

ZapDaddy (AKA Adam)

Devoted reader of wow and most of your other work. I wait impatiently for every update except gravestones. Even time and place, as well as hotness, our present reads and always enjoyable. I cringe at the thought of canceling any of your stories.

HardhatDoozer

WoW has some of the most interesting world building of all of your current works. So of course volume 4 sounds like fun. I think the MC has grown a bit and will be in a better position to live within society’s rules while building his harem. But that balance will be hard enough that it should be an interesting read. Don’t get me wrong, op wish fulfillment is fun but there is lots of content out there. So world building like this is so intriguing in comparison.

C5

Hi recent Patreon here, I had decided to become one because I got hooked on WoW and took a few days off work to binge the whole. After reading about how you get discouraged by all the hate and people threatening to drop the story I just wanted to let you to know that it's a great story and has earned you a fan. Don't let the haters get you down!