Mini Malone Tour! (Patreon)

(Juicy July Days 20, 21 , 22, 23 and epilouge)

It was a wonderful day for a factory tour , and Pinn and Ash walked together hand in hand through the chocolate room. It was a wonderful forest of candies. The two had taken turns feeding each other chocolate covered strawberries growing from the bushes, had shared a giant chocolate tree branch and had some teasing fun at the whipped cream cotton.   Both where a bit gluttonous, both a few centimetres fatter than when they arrived. Yet, the cat and his shapes shifting girlfriend (currently in the form of a dragon) seemed determined to eat though the whole thing.

The host, a young wolf by the name of Malone, watched the pair closely . They where worried on the twos greed. What would they try and eat that shouldn’t be eaten. What would finally be too much for the gluttonous two.  That’s when Malone noticed the pair splitting. Ash meandered into a more forest-y part, using one of her claws to punch a hole into it. Caramel sap oozes out which she begins to lap up. Pinn on the other hand was lying on the bank of the chocolate river , bringing handfuls of the chocolate up to his lips. Malone’s eyes went wide. The caramel wasn’t stable, and the chocolate river was easy to fall into.

She made a snap decision and ran to Ash who was gorging on the sweet caramel. “Miss! I’m going to have to ask you stop eating that...it’s not to be eaten. Its to keep my chocolate trees healthy. The sap itself is a little unstable!” she begged. After one more large slurp of syrup Ash stood back up with a glazed smirk. “its sooo good. Too good just to let’s some trees have it. But ...fine.” she mumbled. Malone sighed in relief until she heard a yelp and a splash. “oh for heavens cake.” They yelled before running to the river. Ash follows behind. Unaware as her stomach turns from teal to a golden caramel colour.

They arrive to see pinn , flailing around in the chocolate river a few feet away from the bank. He was absolutely smothered in chocolate, and despite his best efforts , he couldn’t  swim in the stream of warm chocolate. Ash saw and yelled out in horror. “ I’m coming baby!” before she dove in. To Malone’s horror however, they saw her scales around her hands and neck turning to a caramel hue. “Oh...this isn’t going to be good.”  Malone mumbled.

Ash swam out to Pinn and supported him , steading his flailing. “Come on you...let’s go get you cleaned.” She smiled. Yet...as she tried to swim away it was hard. The current was strong, and she was feeling heavy. Pinn noticed something and gasped. “Honey...your scales...they are turning gold...and your belly! It’s...growing!” he told her in-between small waves of chocolate lapping at his face , filling his mouth  with sweet danger.  Ash did her best to swim them out but they only got dragged further down the river. Malone saw this and sighed. “activate the retrieval pipe...” they commanded over the radio.

Immediately, a long clear tube began to lower towards the river from the ceiling. Malone watched it with regret. Pinn and Ash looked on in confusion as the pipe lowered to them. As it touched the chocolate , it began to suck. The currents dragged the couple down into the chocolate before they zipped up the wide pipe. Malone smiled thinking it had gone simply...until they began to slow. It was quickly becoming clear why. Ash was swelling up! She was growing inside of the pipe, her rear pushing into the strong plastic. It slowed the two of them down until they stopped about ten feet up the twenty foot pipe.

The other guests watched the couple, as the now caramel coloured dragons filled more and more of the pipe. Pinn was pinned against the other side, held in place face to face with his filling girlfriend. “Wh..what’s happening to you?” he asked nervously. Ash groaned , feeling her stomach and ass filling with thick, oozing caramel. “must...be the tree sap...the caramel...it’s filling me up!” yet as she grows, the pressure beneath them was growing too. That was until pinn felt a odd sensation across his whole lower half. He groaned himself, and slowly his fur began to turn brown.

“Is ...that cat turning brown?” Mel  asked.

“I guess you are what you eat. What a fatty like him deserves.” Nikki replied.

Malone hushed them both. “well...when my chocolate is under that much pressure, it can...absorb through the skin. I’m guessing Miss Ash is fine , her scales are hard to push through. Unfortunately , Mr pinn ...less so.” They all watched, including Ash , as Pinn began swelling up with chocolate..his stomach pushed into ashes, creating an even tighter seal in the pipe. Causing more pressure, sending more chocolate into him. However he wasn’t alone. Ash was swelling faster too, the caramel sap taking full effect.

The couple had a moment of relief as they started to rise up the pipe. However they hadn’t actually moved an inch ,their swelling body’s where getting so big that they where growing up the pipe. To make matters worse , Ashes boobs started to grow too, blowing up either side of Pinns head. “How are you gonna get them out?” Warren  asked Malone, worried for the two stuck in the pipe. Malone put a hand on the compassionate guests shoulder “I assure you I have planned for this. This room unfortunately encourages the worst of people’s greed.” She then pulled her radio back out. “activate the champagne protocol.”

The pipe suddenly began to shake, sending ripples through the whole thing. The very full two groaned out, getting knocked up and around .it slowly loosened them up in the pipe. And within an instant , they where freed up and the pressure shot them up above the ceiling within an instant. “Ill have my staff check up on them and make sure they are okay.”

The tour pressed on , despite the oddity that had occurred between two guests involving caramel, chocolate and a very tight pipe. Malone did their best to keep calm despite it all.  It was a little frazzling for the confectioner to have their guests ending up in bizarre fates, even though she was certain the couple would be fine. Yet their biggest worry was next. The chocolate room lead directly into their inventing room, which seemed to always cause troubles with guests. It wasn’t like they had a particularly good group. All of it was one big inconvenience.

Prime example of that was the selfish brat Nikki. The girl had been laughing at  Ash and Pinns misfortune, and she hadn’t exactly been polite in the lead up. She stole from others hands , especially when it came to higher located foods. As a short fennec fox, she obviously couldn’t reach the caramel apples that grew higher on the trees. Yet...instead of asking the other guests to grab it for her, she stole it from their hands . Malone knew a room of things specifically not to be eaten would be a risk for such a brat.

Yet , despite that concern , the boat stopped at the inventing room dock . The tour stumbled up into the room and began to look around. For a few moments , everything seemed fine. Warren was looking over a few things and Melanie didn’t seem to be up to too much trouble. That was when Nikki stomped over to Malone with a fowl scowl. “I am hungry.” She told, with a look demanding urgency and care towards her needs. Malone frowned and looked to her. “Well my dear , this room has nothing quite ready to eat but the next room is a dining room where I have a lunch for us all spread out ready.”

An argument between the two began, but little did Malone know they had focused on the wrong guest. While a little less bratty , Melanie had one very specific desire that no warning or sense would stop her from. Gum. And unfortunately , there laying in the open was a three course strip of deliciously tantalizing gum which beckoned to the fox like a thin sliver of gold. With Malone’s focus stolen by the bratty fennec , Mel quickly hid the strip in her mouth and began to chew greedily. Yet as Malone set Nikki away, the fox began to be subtler with her chomps.

Melanie kept it to herself when she tasted the incredibly fresh tomato soup , so lovely and creamy she wanted to proudly announce the prize she had stolen. Especially Nikki, rubbing this one of a kind experience  in the greedy girls face. Knowing she was hungry from her shouted demands was only icing on the cake.  The gum really was filling her up, feeling like eating a meal . Especially as the second course kicked in. Roast beef with delicious baked potato. The fantastic flavour all hit her all at once. It made her chew even more greedily.

Malone, unknowing of the foolish girl, was smiling widely at the absence of an incident. “alright! We can move right on to the next room! It’s just through this tunnel. Come along all!” they announced happily.  Everyone began walking through the hall, Mel at the back to hide her theft. This meant that as her snout turned from it’s stunning orange to a slick blue, no one noticed.  Not even Mel. She was  focused on the delicious blueberry pie that was filling her mouth. Yet the rounded edges of the hallway echoed the growling of her stomach loudly down the way.

Nervously , Malone looked round to see a now entirely blue  fox , who was nervously rubbing her stomach. “Uh... Mx Malone....I feel funny.” She mumbled out.  The host looked with disappointment at her , watching on as Mel’s belly began to fill. The others started looking too, causing Nikki to laugh . “haha! Fit to fat! All that time at the gym was a waste huh?” she taunted.

“Unfortunately , that’s not fat. See what Miss Melanie has stolen was a rather experiential gum of mine that was designed to feed it’s chewer a full course dinner. Unfortunately for her, the final course won’t stop. Not until she’s...well...a blueberry herself.” Malone clarified. Mel’s eyes immediately went wide, looking at her once slim body rapidly bloating up with juice, a surge filling her hips and ass . “You can’t let this happen to me! Fix this right now!” she demanded.

“its not quite that simple unfortunately. We can’t move you ,.there’s a danger you’d swallow the gum which...” before Malone could finish, Melanie swallowes the gum in one gulp. “there. Now I can’t accidently choke on it or whatever. Now get this out of me!” she demanded. Unfortunately her stomach doubled in size as the juice pounded into her faster than before.

“choking wasn’t the issue. With a big greedy mouth such as yours I never expected you to choke. Swallowing the gum causes it to digest which vastly increases the flow of juice. Everyone... make sure you stay this side of Melanie.” Malone’s command made Mel nervous. Looking around the hall was ten feet wide and just as tall.  The fear filled her mind. “Am I...going to fill this whole hall way?” she asked. Malone only nodded as Mel stretched out, bulging with juice. Her rear making one large round curve which was racing towards the ground.

Nikki began to back away, as if worried she would catch it from Mel. However Warren strode forward , her big bear hands coming down and gently rubbed the girls bulging stomach. “Your gonna be fine... I’m training in berry care. Your gonna be fine. Okay?” She assured . Mel groaned out at the idea that she was a berry but swallowed her pride.  Malone reached out and put her hand on warrens shoulder . “Miss Warren, I have to ask you come with the rest of the tour to the next room.  My staff will help her. “

Warren looked back “I have sworn to help people in this situation. Until she is in good hands , I will remain with her, “ she argued. “So...kick me off the tour or whatever. I am staying.”

Malone , impressed  with her, smiled. “Fine...but I shall wait with you. Miss Niki...please feel free to head to the dining room and make yourself comfortable.  We must make sure Melanie here is taken care of.”. Melanie who had now swollen up into a large ball, was helplessly creaking. Now she only wished she hadn’t swallowed the gum...so she could have something to chew on.

Malone’s your had unfortunately come to a standstill. After miss Melanie chewed a three course gum, she had blown up into a massive blueberry. The host and the most considerate guest , Warren , had stayed behind waiting for staff to arrive to help unwedge the fox from the tunnel. The only other guest, Miss Nikki waited not a moment before continuing non, heading into a lunch room by herself.   Warren was still gently rubbing the large and exposed belly of Mel.

“Gentle rubs can help sooth internal currents. Should ease up the pressure on your skin a bit.” The bear told Mel and Malone. The host rubbed their chin impressed, listening to her every word.  “Would you help me? With a berry as large as her, it’s important for a lot of rubs.” Warren asked.

Malone smiled “of course...just tell me where.”

Warren moved over and gestured to a spot. “ right here...just rub in either a clockwise or counter clockwise.  Don’t switch it up as that will not help as much.” Malone began to rub , making Mel groan out. Her skin was sensitive, but the massage did soothe the ache of the juice in her skin.  Warren returned her hand to the massive berry tum. Weirdly , Malone found it impossible to take her eyes off the bear. Just watching the passion she put into tending to Mel.

Warren, feeling the stare, asked “something the matter? I’m not turning blue too? I know some berries end up contagious...”  it wouldn’t have been her first time blowing up, but she definitely wanted to know  what was coming. Yet Malone quickly cleared up the confusion. “Oh no... Just a little stunned is all. I always made sure people are taken care of but you are just so...tender. “ Warren blushed a little.

“Well... I know it’s not the most common of things...but berried people’s  deserve to be treated with utmost care,” she told. “I find a lot of places don’t do the best job at tending to the unique needs of people like this. There’s a lot they can do that they don’t. “ She informed.  All the while, she kept rubbing Melanies massive body. Thankfully the staff was nearing them, all the while, the corridor began to widen . An emergency procedure for such circumstances.   Hands gently began pushing on Mel as she got rolled away.

Malone went to Warren. “We should continue with the tour... But you’ve made me realize I could very much use someone of your expertise. I would love to hire you as a berried persons safety and care consultant.,” they announced happily. Warrens eye cocked , as if not believing it. “You...know I’m only in training right? Hell...with how things are going , I won’t even be able to finish thanks to the cost.”

“I’ll pay for your classes! You don’t even have to come to work with me, the world needs more like you.” Malone offers without thought.

“but...why would you want me? I’m sure you could find plenty of willing berry care specialists. Ones with more experience and the like.” Warren argued.

“Well... I uh...” they was at a lost . There was no good reason to choose her over anyone else yet Malone’s heart could think of no one they would want more. “well there’s nothing more important than ...encouraging new talent ...right?”  they tried to argue.  However Warren smirked with a knowing look.

“well...while I appreciate the sentiment , I wouldn’t want a job because you Have a crush or whatever.” She argued. Malone blushed bright red, shy that their own deep feelings had been announced. Was they really that readable? All the while , Melanie was rolled through the halls gently. The workers did take care. Malone sighed “well... I am happy to still pay for your classes. My factory makes a good deal of berries. Knowing there are those who make sure they are safe is a good thing. In fact...ill fund the school so everyone learning such a skill does so for free.”

Warren nodded “well...I can’t object to that. Then when I’m done...maybe I’ll come here for a job. In the meantime... I’d love to go somewhere and talk. Somewhere outside of your factory “ Malone’s eyes widened with excitement at the prospect. Their heart beating. “Like... A date?” they asked. Despite their success , they where a shy wolf at heart.

Warren smiled. “yeah... exactly like a date.”

While Malone and Warren dealt with Melanie, Nikki was left to the dinning room herself. She was walking to the room with bratty fury . How dare they make her walk so far? How dare they not hand feed her. Her anger was only matched by her hunger. She was absolutely ravenous. However walking into the dining room was an immediate relief to her. Food. And alot of it. A feast made for all five of the guests and the host themselves. Yet only Nikki was here.

She began eyeing up the food , it was a magnificent spread . If only she was eating , she may as well make sure to get her full of the cream of the crop. All the best bits . She spied a lobster drenched in butter and made for that first. She quickly and without much care began eating , finishing the dish rapidly. She made sure she was still alone , looking left and right, before drinking the left over butter. She rubbed her belly after . Still she was hungry.  A steak next, she tore it into it with speed. No eyes on Nikki to judge her for eating as she wanted. And every bite made her want more.

She began grabbing whatever was close. The pig inside the fennec taking control. Shrimp, salads, breads and butters. She even slurped down sauces straight from the bottle. Her belly was full and was beginning to bulge. Her greed was getting the better of her but she was beginning to slow. That was until she drank down what she thought was wine. However , all it did was make her infinitely more hungry.

She grabbed swaths of food, spreading her arms out wide to shovel thousands of calories into her mouth at a time.  Fat began to try pile onto her stomach, pushing out of her tracksuit. Yet Nikki refuses to leave her hunger unsatisfied. There was a centrepiece made of a turkey surrounded by a whole ham and even a brisket. She set upon them like a starved lion, and ate her way though easily thirty’s people’s worth of food. Little did she know this wasn’t just for the tour but was also for the staff. So they could meet the tour and talk friendly. Most where friends of Malone already. Unfortunately none where there. They where either fishing la caramel dragon and chocolate cat out of a vat of fudge, rolling a giant 10ft round blueberry or generally maintaining the lively factory.

There was food for a hundred. Yet it was being eaten by one. One who was rapidly getting fatter and fatter. Her tracksuit was ripping with soft plush fat oozing out of every tear. Her small frame held little room for fat. Every pound was a massive amount. As she dinned , she grew. And alot. Her ass soon weighed more on its own than her whole body ever did before the feast. Her breasts where bigger than her head each and her stomach stretched out ridiculously far.  So much so that eating more was getting harder. Thankfully, the lardy lady just managed to reach a thresh hold for the food helper.

“Hello ma’am. You have been detected as having mobility issues. What would you like to eat for lunch?” The machine asked.

“E... everything.” Nikki begs.

Unfortunately for her. Everything was more than what remained in the room. The machine lowered a nozzle to her mouth and stuck it in her lips, before flooding in gallons of deliciously sweet candy. Chocolate , caramel, marshmallow , cream, juices, everything. She was getting what she wanted and by the gallon. No longer was she just getting fat, now she was getting tight. Her body groaning in protest yet Nikki determinedly kept gulping down food. Even as she grew larger than any other guest that day , she kept eating.

Malone and Warren, walking closer than before, came to the dining room to find a swelling ball of fat that was once Nikki. She filled the room wall to wall beyond a few feet either side of her. “I...I don’t know what to do about that ...” Warren mumbled under her breath.

“Goodness gracious... I don’t have the foggiest idea either. I for one elect to let her finish her meal. The robot will stop feeding her when Nikki runs out of space . either that’s filling the dinning room. Or...she is truly full."

Hours later, the tour was over and the guests where fixed , thanks in part to the guidance of Warren. Pinn and Ash were shrunk down a fair degree, no longer as comically bloated with candy. Both did support a few extra dozen pounds , making the short Pinn look incredibly chubby. Ash on the other hand was still a little sticky from the surplus of caramel in her system. despite that, the two walked hand in hand, if nothing else glad to be out of the pipe. Melanie , walking behind them, was right back to her normal weight. she was however still dark blue and  incredibly dazed from all the rolling and the juicing process, causing her to wobble from side to side with each step a little. One of Malones staff was aiding her walk to make sure she didn't fall. Nikki was ...less fortunate than the others. all the food she had gobbled down had settled as copious fat upon her body. thankfully , Malone had some excellent diet pills that would melt it all of within a couple weeks. until then however she would be incredibly fat. Five employees had to aid in moving the colossal woman. They would stick with her , helping her around the house until she could move herself. 

all things non too unusual within the factory. no matter what Malone did, guests seemed to find trouble. However, it only ever was the troublemakers that couldn't help her greed. the host took solace that some of the guests may have learned a lesson. Malone themselves left the factory although in her more modest clothes to better blend in with Warren. Both heading towards a small coffee shop. Just when the host least expected it, Warren slid her hand into Malones.  

Pinn belongs to @pinnacle2213 , Melanie belongs to @tennopone, and Nikki belongs to @revobluealbum.