2-4_15 Pencils and Inks (Patreon)

in a sort of rare-but-not-that-rare celestial event, you can see me rewriting the scene here as I'm in the process of drawing it. this page changed incrementally to accommodate the following page, as I made incremental changes to that one ( you'll see that change next time, so stay tuned! )

I stole a line of dialogue from Arizona here, in that rewrite. That's not SO uncommon, sometimes I move dialogue to different characters just to simplify the staging of a scene- especially if it's popcorny dialogue from side characters; I flip-flopped some joke dialogue from Craig to Aberfallow or vice-versa, iirc. It does feel notable here, though, that I'm reassigning more meaningful dialogue away from one of my two main characters. I'm not sure how often I've done something like that!

I think if this weren't a dream I might be less inclined to do that, but we're firmly inside Kay's own mind here, so it doesn't feel so wrong to just move the words to somebody else's mouth.