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original story by myself

"let's find the cat..."

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zdemian

Your art's cute as ever and some nice limb loss action right off the bat. However, your writing overall seems pretty stagnant. This is another fantasy/action comic that starts in pretty much the same way but will just never continue or conclude? If you don't have a full story, I think you might be better off keeping things focused to short one or two issues and having them be self-contained than a bunch of fragmented starts. Keep up the good work all the same!

Bad Ran

I do agree that I wish some of the original stories were not dropped like Hidden Dungeon and Armless After School. However, I think this is the story he talked about in the 2024 new years post and if that’s the case then I believe there is a plan for it. I hope.

Senso Gowang

well, This is not chapter 1, but is the prologue... I plan to make 5 plot stories like this and i will make a vote on which "prologue" I should make the doujinshi version (40 pages) for the project like december ✨️

guy

There are a lot of storys that have a large amount of story but most arent finnished or even close. The biggest problem is that those stories set up grand plots which are difficult to just finish. So yeah, they need to be more short formed or parts of a larger world.