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Oh - I’m sure I did a lot of grammatical errors... 

(ouch, Gabriel!)

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Sarah Marino

Because you jealous bastard hurt him?

Erin

Heads up, I am about to kick Gabriel in his jealous ass.bHands off Aziraphale!! PS: Hey Gabe? Buddy? Jealousy is also a feeling.

Ariana Lipman

Lovely work! No, no grammatical errors. The phrase about not feeling something for someone is a bit awkward. Perhaps ...

Ariana Lipman

Perhaps - Were not supposed to feel things for each other? Instead of “feel something for someone”? It’s a bit awkward but you could leave it as it is and call it archaic.

Ariana Lipman

Gabriel is delightfully intimidating and Az is so lovely and soft and innocent!

Tina Rhea

"I am never wrong"? Pride is a sin, you arrogant ass. You'll never know what they feel.

Wren Truesong

you're definitely feeling something rather terrible, Gabriel, don't front. You bastard.