Example of dialogue from new Questline~ (Patreon)

This dialogue is part of a new quest given by the shadow that visits you in dreams. I would appreciate your opinion on this writing style!

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MC: I was wondering if you might be able to tell me the name of the Master of Tir na Saoithe?

Her eyes sparkled mischievously as she leaned in closer to you.

Euna: Oh, I might know his name, or I might not

Euna: Why do you ask, my dear? - *her voice was soft and playful, her eyes shining with mischief.*

Euna: Are you hoping to impress him with your knowledge? Or perhaps... - *she leaned in closer, her breath warm against your cheek*

Euna: You're hoping to impress me instead? - *she giggled softly*

Euna: You've maintained your composure, though you couldn't help feeling a slight flush rise to your cheeks at Euna's teasing.

MC: I was simply curious if you might have any information on the matter. - *you replied calmly*

Euna grinned slyly.

Euna: Well, I might remember if you remind me why you need to know it. - *She winked at him and twirled a lock of hair around her finger.*

MC: I'm simply trying to gather information about the Master of Tir na Saoithe*

Her lips curved into a playful smile.

Euna: Oh, I see, - *her voice dropping to a sultry whisper* - and what kind of information are you looking for, exactly?

She leaned in closer, her breath hot against your ear.

You felt a shiver run down your spine, but you managed somehow to keep your voice even.

MC: Just his name, Euna. That's all.

Euna: You're no fun, MC... - *her eyes flickering with mischief*

Euna: But if it's just his name you want, I think I might remember it... if you give me a little something in return.

You felt yourself drawn to Euna, your heart beating faster as your lips almost touched. But just as you closed your eyes, she playfully pulled back, leaving you wanting more.

Euna: Mmm, you're quite tempting... - *Euna purred, running her finger along your jawline.* - But if you want to continue, you'll have to visit me more often. - *She flashed you a seductive smile*

As you tried to regain your composure, Euna added:"

Euna: But to answer your question, I'm afraid I don't know the Master's name. But...

Euna: Kyouko might have some information for you. She always seems to know everything that goes on around here.

MC: Thank you, Euna. I'll keep that in mind.

She leaned in and whispered in my ear:

Euna: Remember, this is just the beginning. You haven't seen anything yet.

Euna: So... Do come to visit me again soon, okay? 

She gave you a suggestive wink before closing the door behind you.