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And the last two. I'm not sure when the first finished pages will be done, i wanted to quickly get these sketches out first.

This is where it derived from the orignial request a bit, as there was not enough pages to do what he originally wanted(he said that the tiny is supposed to move around inside her, when she is dodging and fighting and stuff)

That person on the last page is the queen of that fighter, not the princess. Considering how revealing the guardians uniform is, i figured the queen would have a very naughty outfit. But it's just a little cameo, so whatever.

Yes, the setting takes place when modern WC's already exist.

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Scott Miller

That's okay Kibate. I really enjoyed the comic throughout and I am happy with the way it turned out. I like the ending where even a professional can make a small mistake. :D

Kenshin Hikigane

I greatly enjoyed these sketches. A lot going on there, and that ending was just spot on.

Kenshin Hikigane

Also no worries on the anachonism. Greeks on Minos had rudimentary flush toilets in the BC era, i think you’ve got plenty of wiggle room for a fantasy setting XD

Kibate

Hm, did you edit your comment? Because in the email i received of this comment you had a suggestion about changing one panel. I wanted to tell you, that while that panel will remain the same, i decided to add a panel with the suggested scene in the middle there. After the WC and before the first panel of the last row.

Scott Miller

Sorry about that Kibate. Yes, I did edit my comment because the more I thought about my comment I felt it was too selfish to ask that of you given all the work that you put in. I didn't realize that an email was sent out. If you are okay with making the changes and it would not be a big inconvenience, than that would be perfect. Thanks again and I am sorry for the confusion that i have caused.