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Hello, dear patrons! Here's chapter 161! Enjoy!

Bye!

Let me know if you find any problem with the link.

https://drive.google.com/file/d/1IUFVyHXRyPW5ovMNVPRmQ_K8dvsoA__D/view?usp=drive_link

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Gothic Catalyst

Shaking his head, Wang Ling denied. = Wang Ling shook his head, before answering her/ correcting her. ( This one could be a language difference. Where I come from, “shaking his head” would be enough to state that he is saying it is not the truth or the case. The “Wang Ling denied” would not be used.) the other three agreements = the other three’s agreements had little secret left for them. = had little secrets left for them. two warmongering sisters, Demian and Adeluya = two warmongering sisters, Demian and Adeliya and a few others around, like = and a few others, like Despite having a thick skin, = Despite having thick skin, though neither of them = though none of them with a High Tier 3 Elemental Veins enough to sustain = with enough High Tier 3 Elemental Veins to sustain other four had no question, = other four had no questions, First Mission! Yay! Thank you for the chapter.

Calm Wanderer

For the first fix, it's not a language difference, but simply my mistake. I also fixed the rest! Thanks! And yeah, first mission. 'Their first missions will definitely go well, right? Right?' *Insert Padme/Anakin meme*