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Hello, dear patrons! Here's chapter 162! Enjoy!

Let me know if you find any problem with the link.

https://drive.google.com/file/d/1nwu7Jo18hlTy-MoWYqi1iNZE7srRpNer/view?usp=drive_link

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Gothic Catalyst

difference from the buildings around was = difference from the buildings around (it?) was thirty-year-old mortals nd = thirty-year-old mortals and Seeing those people following = (Needs to be rephrase but without ‘those’) nod of his head, Mark explained. = nod of his head, Mark explained (answered/ replied?). comprise those seven = comprise these seven neither of them wanted to choose that option. = (Is this referring to all four of them? Is so ‘neither’ = ‘none’) very close to the Greywood Family = very close to the Greywood Family. On his side, the three Mikhailov women = At his side, the three Mikhailov women As for the female (at?) Foundation Building, his three lovely fiancées made sure any attempt at ‘deeper interactions’ between her and him, beyond a few polite words here and there, (didn't occur/ didn't happen/ remained innocent/ remained friendly?) (with?) Adeliya often being seen chatting with the woman, and the two sisters joining from time to time. Still nothing aside from a few suicidal = Still nothing (happened?) aside from a few suicidal the blue irises seeming to = the (his?) blue irises seeming to Ha, she jinxed them! Thank you for the chapter.

Calm Wanderer

Fixed everything!. Thanks for the help! Yeah, she pretty much did. Not that anyone is surprised about it, though. You're welcome!