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Hello, dear patrons! Here's chapter 170! The wedding is getting closer along with the returns to a familiar place.

Enjoy!

Let me know if you find any problem with the link.

https://drive.google.com/file/d/1GgalmqEe_RVoSS1BkGrCK0yICDzmRcaJ/view?usp=drive_link

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Gothic Catalyst

these two can deal with = those two can deal with should call you lucky or unlucky” = should call you lucky or unlucky.” those four had performed since = those (the?) four had performed since decision of following those four had been. = decision of following those (the?)four had been. we can go back to the Origin Islands” = we can go back to the Origin Islands?” emitted from these two horny dogs, = emitted from these (the?) two horny dogs, I can turn that Realm into a bead.” = I can turn that (this?) Realm into a bead.” Seeing her loving gaze filled, = Seeing her loving gaze, Oho, well at least now I know who the New Lover is in the later chapter. Thank you for the chapter.

Calm Wanderer

Thanks for your help! Yes, I had another candidate in mind and I wasn't even sure I would add this one, but since the novel was about to end I thought why not. It adds someone from outside the family which makes it a bit more interesting. I also used it to practice writing about a love interest outside the MC's immediate 'vicinity' if that makes any sense.

Gothic Catalyst

It does make sense. Adding a romance partner with no real connection when the MC already has others who do is hard.