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Beach Bun Page 12 (Patreon)

Published:
2025-09-15 23:45:05
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2026-06
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Best to be reasured right by the seashore... Might adjust the dialog for this one depending if this seems genuine or misleading. I'd be open to hearing suggestions on both of Bun and Greg's speeches.

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I think it comes to a question of whether you want Ben to be a "Cougar" type, or not. Ostensibly, he is stealing his daughter's boyfriend. Personally, it is really hot if that's what he's doing, but it might not be where you want to take the character

Mad Will

Well I'm upset. -_-

Rassy Fresh

Honestly I would like and this is a suggestion but two endings but let's hope greg gets out and Brittany does get a broken heart or hate her dad 😬

Landkraken

I personally really love this. Kinda makes me feel like maybe some of the past bf's "accidentally" chose to stay too long as well.

Cirayu

Mememememememememememmemememe

Nicki

Genuinely loving this a lot, keep it up!!!

Jamie McMillan

I know it's probably too late to change, but I'd remove one of the 'really' from Greg's speech, as the repitition breaks the flow of the dialogue. I'd also add 'on' between 'reflect' and 'something' and add a full stop to the end of the first half, so it reads: "Your father is right, I'm having the time of my life, I know you don't want me here but being in this position certainly made me reflect on something you said before. Really, I'd be here forever if I can. Just know I'm always here if you need me…"