DRR Chapters 52 & 53 edited, 54+ tomorrow (Patreon)

Just wanted you guys to know I've edited chapters 52 and 53 a bunch (they're both 3k+ chapters now). I'll summarize the changes further down in this post if you don't want to reread the chapters. 54 will be coming tomorrow since it's also a longer-than-usual chapter, maybe along with 55 depending on how this toothache decides to treat me.

Changes for 52 & 53:

• More grounding for Ethan's situation; he's a little more concerned about what's actually happening with his body and what's left with Bimar/Ahkelios

• Tiebacks to the main plot (concern for Guard and Whisper's situation, mostly)

• Ethan making an active attempt to connect with his body and figure out what's going on outside the Mind Vault while talking to Gheraa

• Fleshed out the characterization a bit more