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Purpose and Conviction will be the next chapter that will be worked on! I should have it released tomorrow or worst case, day after tomorrow, and BananaPeak will also release the other stories soon, don't worry lads!

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COTE: Erotic Misfortune Ch11

Yo Been a while lads. Life's been a bit busy for me sadly. But here it is, the new chapter! Please enjoy Start: The day before the midterms, and the air in Classroom 1-D was thick enough to chew. From his usual seat at the back, Kiyotaka contemplated the current progress of his ...

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Juan

I don't understand Ayanokouji's logic in going to Ichinose for help with Kushida. Especially as the end of the chapter proves Ayanokouji can get Kushida to talk to him when need. What does Ayanokouji expect a buffer who doesn't know, and can't know, the proper context?

Juan

Does Ayanokouji think Kushida genuinely considers Ichinose a friend? If so, why?

Juan

Why is Ayanokouji saying Kushida had him fooled before he stumbled across her? Aren't scenes across the chapters where Ayanokouji internally points out that Kushida isn't what she's making herself to be?

Juan

So something I've been thinking about since last chapter. Ayanokouji stated he wasn't interested in a girlfriend and wouldn't be for a while. Does that mean for all the interactions he is going to have with girls, he isn't actually going to do anything? Ala To Love Ru stuff. Because I can see that getting old sooner rather than later.

Cody

Another incredible chapter and I am eager to see what shall happen next.

Demon_Knight939

sort of yes, sort of no. it is like To Love Ru initially, but at some point as he remains in this university, he will be getting better and would actually enter a relationship, though it would be a long while until that happens

Demon_Knight939

Because in this story, though Ayanokouji still retains his usual sharpness (which helps him pick up as well that Kushida isn't what she seems to be), he still tries to not be quick to judge or assume, to actually truly find out and be kind in general to people with both his actions and his inward thoughts, so Kushida did have him fooled because he was actively trying to not judge people in general.

Demon_Knight939

He simply thinks that even if Kushida is fake to Ichinose, she has no reason to be antagonistic to Ichinose, the opposite actually, she has every reason to be as close to Ichinose as possible as it would help Kushida with her own image

Demon_Knight939

He can get Kushida to talk to him at any time, but he'd rather not entirely rely on him just calling her to him like a pet so they could fix up as that would simply remind Kushida of their dynamic and her situation. but when he does call her, it would be when he needs her help with something, which is what you're going to see next chapter

Demon_Knight939

Don't worry, you're going to love what happens soon😎😎

Juan

What I meant was, Ayanokouji's problem is that Kushida dislikes him for knowing her secret (and accidentally embarrassing her). What is sitting down with her while Ichinose acts as buffer supposed to about that in Ayanokouji's mind?

Juan

I thought has just occurred to me. Wouldn't a meeting with Ichinose involved only serve as further incentive of the threat Ayanokouji possesses in Kushida's mind by showing her that Ayanokouji has access to another popular girl that could help bury her even further? Ayanokouji could already get Kushida expelled and worse, with Ichinose's help he can also sway any students who don't believe him onto his side. And I imagine Ichinose would be happy to help once she knew Kushida attempted to falsely accuse him of sexual assault and blackmail him. These hings should be readily apparent and on her mind once she sees Ichinose and Ayanokouji together.

Juan

Hmm, I wouldn't call that being fooled. He gave her the benefit of the doubt until she eventually proved his suspicions right.

Juan

That's a bit disappointing to be honest. I imagine reading next chapter where something is going to happen with Chabs, Kushida, and possibly Horikita. There is going to be some nicely written erotic tension, physical intimacy, and embarrassment. Then the idea is going to prompt themself, these relationships are going to hit a wall, and eventually after years of following the story potentially none of them will progress past it and Ayanokouji will have chosen some other girl to be his girlfriend. Through given one of your authors notes, and the story so far, Kushida does have a likely chance at being the end girl. But back to the point, in a story like this, having an erotic story were the protagonist isn't willing to engage in erotism seems like a momentum killer. Through maybe I'm over thinking things and having Chabashira accidently shove her bosom into Ayanokouji's face for the fifth time will remain enjoyable even if their relationship barely has any progression as a result.

Demon_Knight939

sorry for the late reply, i didn't see this till now. and here's what I have to say, have faith brother, you're definitely going to like what I'm going to do with the story, but it will be like this for a good while first before everything proceeds in the way you want😎