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I posted the other two chapters for BananaPeak's stories down below, and as mentioned, BananaPeak is working to release another batch this month so we can upload them on the new tier😎

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Another World? Dattabayo? Ch10

Yo Chapter 10 over here. Do enjoy Start: BYAKUYA'S POV The afternoon air in Karakura Town felt artificial compared to Soul Society's purity - thinner, diluted, lacking the crystalline quality of spiritual energy that permeated Seireitei. Byakuya Kuchiki stood on a rooftop overlooking the ...

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Jamal walker

Hey, just wanted to say I love the story overall. I have 2 things to say, though. There are too many POV changes and not enough focus on the guy everyone came to read about. I have no problem with other POVs it's just that when Naruto only has 4 lines compared to everyone else, it gets boring. And maybe it's just the way I'm reading the stories, but the spacing seems to be too much, as in too much blank space between the sentences. Besides that, keep up the good work, and I can't wait to see the next chapter.

Demon_Knight939

Hey brother, just saw your comment now😅 BananaPeak does tend to change with many povs, I don't complain too much considering his chapters tend to be of much higher length than what I squeeze out. I will let him know that you liked the story though😎