Big Update + The Marine's Code Ch1 (Patreon)
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Hey lads, so big update.
1) I finished editing the first four chapters of Beyond the Ashes, you'll see quite a few major changes, I'll upload them now! (I deleted all the chapters I had so I can present this new polished version, I should be done with all the other chapters by monday or tuesday as I spent most of my time in the past two weeks making edits and revisions to Beyond the Ashes.
2) Now I also deleted the Marine's will of fire, and the reason why is because me, UpperCut-Johnson and BananaPeak have decided that she shouldn't be here with us when her writing style feels very repetetive, inconsistent, and there is a number of other issues too. like how even though she wrote "Gojo's Black Pearl" and any other story, UpperCut-Johnson was the one who really edited it and refined it massively, which is why it's so good, it also goes without saying, but he'll take over the other stories she wrote and improve them, though we might reboot or refine "The Ramen-Obsessed Hollow", that one will have to be paused for a bit.
so in light of that, UpperCut-Johnson and I decided to reboot the story, and it's now titled as "The Marine's Code", you'll find this to be a massive improvement, and you won't have to worry about repetetive dialogue or it feeling A.I like with how it was with MissSnickers.
3) UpperCut-Johnson is also done with chapter 2 of "Three Hearts" so I'm going to post that today! around evening time
4) I also deleted the last two chapters of "The Shinobi's Rabbit Goddess", see the thing was, I had to take care of somethinng a while back, and actually had MissSnickers take over and do chapter 19 and 20, so when I read it and saw the inconsistency with the dialogue, the events that took place that contradicted what happened in the first 18 chapters, and so on, I told myself that I obviously can't just ignore it, so I'm going to take care of that asap, and will also upload ch21 in this month.
5) I also have another surprise for you all. so I was working on a new story as I figured you guys could use that too. and I figured why not do one more COTE X Oregairu. I finished the chapter and I will post that today too!
6) Since I'm pinning this post for the next few days, all chapters and uploads will be down below this post, I already uploaded Beyond the Ashes V2 Ch1 down beneath, and should upload even more in a bit!
and I believe that's everything, hope you all like the new chapter, and hope you all like the plenty of chapters I'll upload today!!.