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BONUS PANEL:

COMIC I MAY NOT PUBLISH BECAUSE I INKED IT AND THEN REALIZED I DON'T LIKE IT THAT MUCH:

I don't know what I don't like about this one. I think there's something not quite satisfying about the last panel. Like, it's a little too basic, and it can be simultaneously funnier and more subdued somehow. Maybe just like a little jester guy holding a bomb?

I dunno, it's been rough lately with the comics, folks. I'm keeping the faith though.

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bug boy

This is me n my brother because i love detailed characters and character studies and writing people and he loves worldbuilding and cohesive narratives and making a world grounded but unique together it makes a very fun story writing duo which we do nothing with any of it

Lisa B

The funny business guy in the background just staring for the perfect moment throughout the comic like the 2016 clowns

Catherine

I think if I had to critique the ending comic I'd say that the last panel isn't different enough? Like I'm used to 3 over the top panels and then one simple silly one and vice versa. Maybe that's the issue?

Catherine

I do like the concept though, and the worldbuilding comic is real as hell I like that one too

Jon Barker

When you lose the faith we hold it for you, bro. It's like that shitty footprints in the sand thing, but with 10000 sets of prints instead of a lame 1.5 average.

Moxy Fruitbat

Absolutely called out in the first one, smh 😞

Steven Fletcher

I really like the funny business panel on its own but I see what you mean about it not fitting well as the last panel. I’m glad I got to see it though.

skysyzygy

I really like Small Girl With Radiator, I will enjoy her presence even if it is only in ink

RahPotato

Keep going Shen!! I've been a fan of yours for years and years! I love your comics. You're awesome, my guy. Your humor is my humor. I always giggle while reading all the shenanigans. Anyway - just know we're cheering you on! Kpop Demon Hunter style 😉 Also the character building vs world building crisis is exactly how my sister and I operate. Why are we like this?

shencomix

it's honestly kinda worth it to finish this comic just for girl with radiator alone. i might have an idea for the funny business panel

Hal 🔆

I really love the funny business panel hahahah the projectiles all at once and the expression on the jesters face

snek

Peak ass fighting game comic

Dzee Szed

Maybe the funny business panel needs the serious guy in it, with an apple pie, a dolphin, and a grand piano falling on him.

Sergio Waij

And we're keeping faith in you cause that was some good stuff

GGN

these are objectively great

ShellBee

I actually really like the funny business panel. The chaotic explosion of items is good