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Hey Guys.
There are some new jokes, wording changes, and such. If any of you has time to watch it and tell me if anything is amiss I'd appreciate it.

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Anonymous

The puns are much appreciated.

Anonymous

First off I am so glad to see more Pacificist%, it is my absolute favorite series on youtube and you always put so much work into it and is always such high quality content. I hope I am helping and not just annoying. I know a lot of this is very small and probably not worth fixing, but better to point it out and let you decide. 7:26 "Ah" is an expression of relief "Uh" is an expression of confusion "Ugh" is an expression of disgust. They are all pronounced the same way but I don't think you or Michael meant it as "Ah" in this case. 8:20 "Reality" should technically be reversed for the few frames from inside the car. Very small detail of course. 11:56 You may want to capitalize Pacifist% as it is the title to your videos. "George R.R. Martin" is how he spells it with 2 periods, one for each "R." "Rockstar Games" puts a space in their name. ""It's" about time"." We have been holding off releasing GTA "VI" until that series finishes. Wait"," there are how many more episodes left? FFS"."" "It's" instead of "it is" flows better. Rockstar always uses roman numerals for GTA. "wait?" is not a question. Add a period after FFS. "Bidnez" does not return any relevant search results but Bidniz and bidnis both do. Obviously they are all spelled wrong which is the point. "Unfortunately"," that isn't possible"," but watching really long challenge videos on YouTube will feel like an eternity"," so that is basically the same thing." Added three commas. 12:51 17:17 20:40 You said earlier in the series about not getting armor unless absolutely necessary but now you don't mention it. Armed melee vs unarmed melee is also not counted, although reviewing the series this seems consistent and isn't actually part of the rules. Melee being better than shots also isn't explicitly laid out in this episode. 22:07 You had to do the shootout again but never update the melee total, it could be assumed to be the same but is a bit confusing considering your statement about being able to get more lucky and have your allies take out more enemies for you.

DarkViperAU

Thanks! The reflection is unnecessary, I prefer the clarity. The armour just confuses things. I didnt have to do the shoot out again, I just went back to the checkpoint. I did mention that by the rules I have to use melee. Do you think it comes too late? I dont always put the rules, I tried but it looked really cluttered I corrected all the rest, thanks again :)