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The Nemesis Sheet

It is said to appear between rivals who share true hatred, crossing worlds to find them both. When one receives the Nemesis Sheet, their enemy in a parallel realm receives it as well. Here are its rules:

Rule 1 - When the Sheet manifests before you, know this: Your bitterest enemy, in a parallel world, holds its twin;

Rule 2 - If you choose to use the Nemesis Sheet, your foe will become a beautiful woman. There is no other outcome;

Rule 3 - You may write the how, the when, and the what-she-remembers. You may even command reality itself to forget the man she was;

Rule 4 - Your Sheet is powerless until your enemy's is activated, and vice-versa. To use it is to know that they, too, have chosen to use it on you.

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How it would work:

So this serie would work something like this:

Page 1 - We are presented Two Enemies, and in different timelines each receives the NEMESIS SHEET;

Pages 2&3 - Shows what happens on Timeline A - Character A transforms Character B;

Pages 4&5 - Shows what happens on Timeline B - Character B transforms Character A;

Amusingly, Rule 4 means that any transformation you go through is SELF INFLICTED.

Both parties are assholes, both are assholes enough that they don't mind screwing alternate versions of themselves as a "Trade Off" - making them partialy to blame for their own situation, and both get an ending as guy/girl.

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Example:In the setting we have an asshole class pres that is a hardass and power trips - and a delinquent bully that likes doing delinquent bully things;

In Timeline A

Delinquent gets the Nemesis Sheet: Delinquent writes that "all class presidents must be curvy hot girls" and writes down "every time someone breaks the rules, the class pres must do lewd punishments" and etc. With the delinquent being delighted to be able to break the rules and the class rep now has to do all these embarrassing things.

In Timeline B

Class Pres gets the Nemesis Sheet: Class pres writes "Every time Delinquent tries to break school dress code, he will dress like a gyaru. Every time he tries to fight someone he will suck them off. He shows his hatred by doing lewd things". Class pres now knows that the more Delinquent tries to defy him, the more he will fall for it.

And then I can keep doing it again and again with all sorts of archetypes and characters. Sometimes I could even sprinkle something like "their new waifu makes them a nicer person".

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From time to time I kind of want to do some transformations, where one character is maliciously transforming the other, but I have an odd relation with that approach. While I have no problems reading stuff like that (and even find it hot), doing it without any commonplace to the asshole transdorming the other others also doesn't quite sit well for me. It's why most often my work have forces outside of the character's control transforming them.

I also often have lots of one off ideas for transformations on my back burner, with several different designs and concepts I'd like to draw.

I think I got a way to solve both of these in one swoop.

WRITE DOWN WHAT YOU THINK! WHICH OTHER DUOS WOULD YOU LIKE TO SEE FEATURED ON IT?

Comments

Reality Warp Potpourri

Well, if we’re doing examples, how about rich, pompous douchebag having to deal with an obnoxious new redneck neighbor (sort of a Beverly Hillbillies situation). In the rich guys universe, the redneck ends up becoming a stern maid who ends being a lot more courteous than the rich man and ends up whipping him into a proper gentleman. In the redneck’s universe, the rich man becomes a good ol’ country girl that actually ends up making the redneck into a nicer guy (mainly now because he has someone who he can share his interests with).

Steve Hedge

How about two work rivals, one being a long time employee who had worked there for years and never got a break, while the other is a young up and comer who gets promoted because of his connections? The elder employee writes that the nepo baby needs to learn how to really work hard and he becomes a low paid waitress who works hard on her knees while the nepo baby writes that the over worked guy needs to relax, becoming a rich brat who always gets what she wants from her father?

RocketKnight777

Idk if pop culture characters count for this or not; but the ones I can think of that might use this include Joey and Kaiba. (Joey does it just overall tired of Kaiba’s bs and makes him his new girlfriend. Kaiba, though he doesn’t believe it will actually work, is equally tired of Joey’s attempts to show him up abd get between him and Yugi, and turns him into his personal secretary.) Ash and Gary. (Gary turns Ash into one of his cheerleaders and Ash makes Gary his tsundere girlfriend.) Beyond that, all I got is Jock bully turning his nerd target into a tomboy girlfriend, and the nerd making the bully into an equally nerdy girlfriend.

Lucas

This is an interesting one, as it requires a bitter rivalry. If you wanted to do say, a Superman and Lex situation, you'd need to first come up with a reason for Big Blue to use it, and barring Injustice situations, he just wouldn't without a hell of a good cause. That said, Lex spending GDPs to figure out which universe has Clark with a sheet and then convincing him that "no, that Lex is clearly an egg, you'd be doing her a big favor," is a really funny image. You could work out something like Resurrection Room era Cyclops and Captain America; the key is that both characters are interesting enough that there'd be a fun story about them working around the effects of the sheet. I'd be curious if these were intended as single use items, or if a sheet can be edited after the initial effect. Reality warping is always good, but reactive reality warping employs a lot of entertaining meta-narrative, and opens up the possibility of comeuppance.

Silver Acies

Here is my idea: two friends turned really harsh enemies after falling for the same girl, but both are dumped? One is a lady's man from a well off family, the other is a goth who grew up between orphanages and isn't too well off. In a bout of jealousy, the ladies man transforms the goth to a giggling bimbo serving high-class clients, and the goth turns the ladies man to a rude, standoffish, but nerdy Short Stack goth girl. I'm also curious if for an ending, it would turn into a 'grass is greener' situation, and both regret doing it eventually. I feel like this story idea is ripe for a twist ending (girl who dumped them was a lesbian and is now in love with who they changed, girl was the one who left the note, male versions still end up alone, etc.).

MNI

A Pirate and a Navy man have faced off against one another for 'years'. As they get sick and tired of the same old routine, the navy man receives the note and describes a perfect lady to bring back home for courtly affairs... An intelligent blonde with a fierce tongue and a cunning streak. The Pirate meanwhile describes a flaming red head to join him terrorizing the sea as his first mate. The dame lacks composure or common sense, and is a relentless thrill seeker.

The Sheriff

Two claimants for the same throne - a flamboyant, dandy, unserious legal heir and the stern, severe hard military man. Timeline A: the Young Heir’s rival is now just as stern and dedicated to her role as ever, but now that role is to please the Young King and bear his heirs as wife and queen. She still finds him annoying, frustrating and stupid - but he is her husband now and she’s got some Tsundere vibes going on. She’s unaware of the change in this timeline - and as much as he likes his hot wife, the new king is annoyed by her as well. im thinking severe colors (Imm thinking short, dark hair even transformed to sell home the ice queen vibe) Timeline B: The Military man wants a blushing little bimbo, but keeps their memories of events intact. Twist, she’s more then content to give up power as a Queen because she’s still spoiled and kept in the lap of luxury - and he has to keep dealing with her because marrying her is how he can take the throne. I think a silly, short busty little red head works for her The twist is that, in either timeline, both are happier. Like either option A or B is better then the status quo and will mutually make everyone happier - despite open/claimed annoyance

Ditimiss

Car accident between 2 folks. Office Girl rushing home from work, tired of a long day at the job and wishing they had more people and wasn't quite paying enough attention and a guy rushing to college after waking up late and also wasn't paying enough attention. Words and papers exchanged, hate from both sides. Both finally get to their respective destinations to realize they have this nemesis sheet instead of insurance information. Lady wants the dude to work under them diligently, always listening to what they want, being a Yes girl for her that is much more dependable than the last few hires. Dude wants to finish college and not be so stressed out. Forces the lady to be a tutor and butler/driver of sorts for him, as, if she was coming back from a job in that fashion? she must be smart.

Zeroth17

Two heirs to an empire resembling Imperial Germany- one a humble but stern man and the other an arrogant charlatan. Timeline A: The first is now a spoiled and vapid but still pretty sweet rake who is head over heels for the new king. She is unaware of the new timeline, nor would she care where she's now a lover of wine and fine furs and staying in the lap of luxury. Timeline B: The second is now a humble but stern princess who acts like a tsundere to the new king. (I'm sorry if this one was shorter, but I couldn't think of what else to say.)

samrj1123

A construction worker going to work at 8 a.m. like normal and a professional gamer trying to sleep after nights of gaming have had screaming matches early in the morning. Timeline A: The gamer is turned into a busty e-girl on OnlyFans that does all kinds of things for subscribers. She still screams at the construction worker, but she is much better to look at, especially when her bra slips. Timeline B: The construction worker is turned into a busty female construction worker wearing skimpy clothes. The jackhammer is still annoying as hell, but the bouncing boobs definitely make things better.

Whiteeyes1989 Writing

Hmmm, interesting. Of course being the multiverse this can screw you over without it ever being your fault. Like I would never be willing to use it because I actually would care about screwing over an alternative version of me, but there is no gurantee that another version of me would feel the same way. And so they might screwing me over even though I would never do the same to them. So in a way you kind of have to be a worst version of a person to use this.

MightFenek

To be honest I'm picturing these versions as close to you as possible, rather than any big personality change between them. Otherwise it wouldn't be fair.