Elites of the citadel (concept)(Lunch sketch) (Patreon)

This time we'll make this sketch public because we want to know as much thoughts as possible about it. This is a concept for a possible rpg game which would be way more simpler than Elana, Champion of Lust, and that could be a transition project or a way to get some more support to finish Elana's project in case of need.----------------------------------------------------------------------------------The story takes place in a magical world where there are two main races, the Teserexies, who are all females and the  Onibors, who are all males. This is not a problem for them because they reproduce with non-sexual ways since they are magical beings. The two races, even having their own laws, live in a symbiotic society due to a friendship forged centuries ago, when their alliances helped them to overcome dark times.In those times the Onibors saved the Teserexies but were cursed because of it. The curse produces on the Onibors a huge sexual urge, which ultimately drive them into a primal and barbaric state.  As a thank to the Onibors, the Teserexies swear to help with the curse, removing their urges and preventing them from losing their minds. This way the honorable profession of the Acknowledgers was born. 

The time passed and this Acknowledgers became a needed and very respected part of the society. The urges of the Onibors can't be handled by all Teserexies and even those who can handle them can't handle all of them. Because of this and, to always be prepared, a competition was born to maintain all  Acknowledgers in shape and find the strongers of them to manage all the urges. This lead to the creation of ranks for the Acknowledgers, where the leaders of them are the Elites of the Citadel, the most talented  Acknowledgers and a great power inside the society of the Teserexies.At least... This is what most of the Teserexies and Onibors think...------------------------------------------------------------In this game you will accompany Jilly, a recently ordered Acknowledger who will work hard and learn a lot to be able to face all kinds of shapes and levels of the Onibors urges and  whose dream is to increase her rank and become part of the Elites of the citadel.Any thoughts? What do you guys think about a possible game like this?Obviously this are just rough and provisional ideas, names and designs. The door is open to more genders/mechanics/races... but probably in the case it moves forward and it is highly demanded and successful enough.