Monday transparency report (Patreon)

Hey guys!  Nearly completed all the feedback edits.  I’ve been working hard on some big improvements – snappier writing in general, and less prescriptive characterisation of the heroine specifically (this is basically an accumulation of small changes, for example, the game no longer decides you can’t go braless in the DDI photoshoot, it’s up to you).

Edits I’ve completed include:

two much steamier masturbation scenes

new dialogue branches

restored and punched up the topless pool scene, putting more emphasis on the heroine’s agency in the scene

Bettis gets wettis: revised the mission logic so, if Bettis is your wingwoman for the wet t-shirt contest in Pattaya, the plan explicitly involves her taking part in the contest too.  (This had profound effects on chemistry and pacing.)

Changes like this obviously affect the upcoming Pattaya content, that’s why I need to finish this first, then move onto that.

I’m just on the last part now – implementing an improved Max sex scene – it’s already much hotter.  I’ll get back on it in the morning, and update you guys shortly.  🦀❤️‍🔥