Page Two Improved Sketch (Patreon)

This is the improved page 2. Page one will be uploaded soon but it's nothing exciting. I basically cleaned up the lines and put in where lettering will take place. Lighting will help alot. Panel three presents a problem of sketching which is how to make a blurry phone pic, which will be better done in the more refined page. I am really happy with the boot in the bottom page. Adam's face though meh LOL