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Story time.

It was Mother's Day at the Borowsky house. The two parents planned to spend some time together to pass the evening. They watched one of Candy's favorite movies, talked about her books and did a small bit of gardening. The tender pair soon began to feel a bit more intimate and the day went on. They both decided it was time for some pleasure.

"Mae honey!" Candy called to her daughter, who was conveniently on her way outside. "Be sure to take your time. Dinner might take a while."

Mae gave her usual, short affirmation and headed outside. The sky was already orange with the coming night. Mae didn't go far, she simply went to the backyard, picking up her trusty bat on the way there. After a half hour of practicing her swings, staring at the clouds and vandalizing the fence, Mae was feeling a bit peckish. She noticed the kitchen window was open. No steam was billowing out, nor did she smell dinner being cooked at all. She grabbed the sill of the window and hoisted herself up. "Hey Mom! When's dinner gonna- Ah! Whooooooooooaaaa!"

Her parents were straight up plowing on the table, rattling the poor vase that sat there. 'Oh, crap!' Mae thought to herself. She lowered herself to not be seen while thoughts raced through her head. 'Damn, I didn't think mom was THAT big. Dad too. Has he always been that big? I used to take baths with him! Crap, that's dirty! More importantly, what about dinner?' Still keeping her head low, Mae looked around the kitchen. She noticed the landline phone was off the ringer, while a business card of the local pizza place was lying next to it. 'Nice, I hope they finish before dinner gets here.' Mae thought to herself, almost forgetting her parents were relentlessly slamming their groins together. 'Man.... Now I want someone to viciously ram me before dinner... Mom's lucky to have dads huge dick. I wish I...' After a moment of pause, Mae tried desperately to erase the train of thought from her brain.


(Story feedback would be apreciated)
Update 1: Fixed a few spelling and grammar mistakes

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DatFMEntertainment's Horny on Main

Story is alright, at least as far as I’m concerned. Reminds me of short bits I tried to write for pictures. Let’s see if someone experienced at critiquing writing will respond with something more.

Samuel

He's plowing her, and I subconsciously want him to plow me! Oh my goooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooood!

FennyFen_1

Turned out fantastic!

Valeur

The story itself is rather short. Similar to how some like to have a mini story along with their pictures. I found it fine, maybe some more description of what’s going on in Mae’s mind. Maybe let the reader see how dirty her thoughts get? Have Mae imagine that it was her taking that dick. Imagine what she’d say if her dad’s big dick was in her face, or stuff like that. Part of the fun of these situations is the taboo nature of it. Great picture by the way.