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Oaths to Keep Pt. 09 (Patreon)

Published:
2025-01-10 22:34:48
Imported:
2025-01

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John, Amber and new friends. A dungeon run.

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RDJohnson

This turned out to be a rather long chapter, and I had to juggle a lot of characters, so I would really appreciate your feedback on how you like it, and what I could do better.

Joseph Snyder

Well… Yes. I think you got the monk class because the system your dedication to wrestling counted as a martial arts focus. Not because Need clarification in this sentence. Jenny is so far unbearable in this chapter, literally ignoring everything said to he to create her own dialog, main character is beyond patient when here entire side of the conversation is her swearing at him, accusing him of things, and acting like he's amonster

PC

There are a number of minor errors in each of the chapters (sentences that end abruptly, incorrect use of words, etc). Not enough to point out specifically, but I'd be happy to go through and do an edit of the docs if there was some way to get them back to you. Is there an editing platform on Patreon like Literotica has?