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Hi guys, rather than have you wait until I finish another 66 page whopper of a chapter, I was thinking I'd drop sub chapters as I make progress. IF you read these sub chapters, bear in mind that everything in them might end up in a vicious retcon, if I can't make the chapter work out, and have to redo some or all of it. It happens. This part is about 14 pages, I intend to post another chunk when I have something about that size. Be sure to let me know if you guys think this is something you want, or if you would rather I wait until I have a final version to post.

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Lore

However you prefer.i do like readong the longer chunks but i honestly was worried you had abandoned it. Maybe update if its take longer than usual?

RMN

Smaller chunks of story does help to maintain interest. I agree with the previous comment about the need for more frequent updates. Wondering if John and Amber will get it on at all in the dungeon? Would be interesting if the dungeon could be fed at a different way.

RDJohnson

heh, well, while there probaly IS a sex dungeon out there, with shibari themed challenges, I don't think its in the cards for this one.

PC

I'm happy to read parts of the chapters more often rather than waiting months in between, and provide feedback along the way. For example, about half way through it has "pushed the ???? in front of me, Gorlok"

RDJohnson

Good point and good catch! I think the missing word should be "guy, orc, warrior, person, colleague" - one of those would fit, but I guess I never figured out which one I'd use, so I blanked out. Literally, in this case, as I just left it blank. I have tentatively settled on "guy" in this case. Thanks for pointing it out, it will be fixed in the final version of the chapter, as I don't plan on reposting the unfinished chunks whenever someone helps me fix mistakes. (well, if they are particularly immersion breaking I just might)