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Oaths to Keep UNFINISHED Pt. 14.4 (Patreon)

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2026-04-10 19:17:53
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2026-04

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Here it is, the fourth part of chapter 14. This is the end of the chapter, but I will give you guys a few days to comment, before I put it all together as the official chapter 14, in case there are some last minute errata...

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OathsEnjoyer

First I want to tell you I’m really enjoying the story so far. One thing I’m a little confused about in this chapter is why especially John feel safe enough in the safe zone to have sex. It seems like the orcs could easily end the fight with the mini boss a little too quickly and then John and Amber would be in trouble? Also I would add that personally I’m not very into the breeding/pregnancy thing, but of course if that is what you want you should keep it. And finally I wondering if in the future more cooking/ crafting/ blessing based buffs will be explored. Maybe they will help the cook at the high school access her character sheet and perhaps even “smuggle” her out from the high school to get some system recipes from the kiosk for buffing food. Looking forward to future chapters of your great writing!

RDJohnson

They barred the door, and were more horny than sensible. The safe zone _should_ be safe enough, if you are out of line of sight. They don't trust it completely, as Creature did find a way in (which was because it was observing them when they went inside via its dungeon sense, but John and crew doesn't know that). But, they were a bit too horny to be sensible. The breeding kink is not going to be a thing, just a one time thing, so don't worry. Yes, cooking/crafting stuff will definitely be a thing. Jenny has some crafting skills, and we have seen how Amber's equipment has started to come apart in her hands due to her ridiculous strength. Better quality items, higher tier materials, can compensate. Also, Carrie has a skill to make witches brew - potions that require various harvested monster parts and other System spawned stuff - not quite cooking, but close enough. As for actual cooking... I like that thought. System generated food, and food cooked with system skills could give buffs like in WoW. Great suggestion.

PC

Thanks for the new posting, great as always. One typo I found, "her tight right riding", I guess should be "ring"? I would agree it seems a bit "unglaublich" to go at it under the circumstances, to quote the late orcish scholar. The safe zone wouldn't apply if they were already being chased by the orcs. Maybe more believable if they had some indication all the orcs were already dead, unless you have further plans for them? At least they barred the door...

RDJohnson

The safe zone safety usually applies as long as you have broken line of sight. Creature managed to bypass the protection in a previous chapter, because it was able to observe them enter the safe zone through its "dungeon sense" that allows Dungeon and Creature to view what is going on inside their domain. Initially, I wanted them to go into one of the back rooms, but the scene just kinda unfolded in a different way. You are right, that it was bold, maybe even foolish of Amber and John to rely on the protection of the safe zone, but I guess my excuse is they were both getting very hot and bothered by murder boner. Maybe I should have one of them listen at the door first, to make sure the immediate threat was gone, before they throw caution to the wind.

RDJohnson

Thanks for catching the typo, you are correct!

PC

What about a bit of retcon to add something into the earlier chapter where Amber had to change into her were-badger form to escape the misty maze and lost her non-badger clothes, and *that* got John all hot and bothered when they got to the safe zone? At least something more erotic than being covered by goblin blood (unless that has unknown aphrodisiac properties...🙄) to make them want to get it on?