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Finally, another part appears.

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OathsEnjoyer

Another great part, very curious to see what will happen with the base outside town. Maybe they will get the old school muskets to work within the system? I have found just one typo, in the sentence: “aim not taking the orcish armor” the “not” I believe should be a “now”. But again, I’m really enjoying the story, great work.

PC

One typo in the first melee with John - "un used" should be "unused".

PC

Thanks for the update, it looks like everyone is in for an interesting time. I particularly liked John's inner thoughts as he was fighting the orc. Cogito ergo sum.

RDJohnson

The problem with muskets is that gunpowder is super unreliable. Some alchemist could probably fix it, but the System decided for arbitrary System reasons that gunpowder and gasoline rarely works. But propane does work... maybe someone could modify a musket to use propane as propellant?

OathsEnjoyer

I was more so thinking that maybe the system could accept somebody using the muskets and some old school gunpowder to make a blunderbuss type weapon and ammo work. But I also fully understand if you want to keep the world gun-free in this type of setting.

Knightlord

Don't suppose there's any word on when the combined version of chapter 14 is done? I've been holding off reading till it's fished

RDJohnson

I'll get right on it. Sorry for the delay.

PC

Looking forward to the next part of Chapter 15, and where John & the crew are going with their plan, and how the other newly-introduced elements will interact with them.

RDJohnson

Soon! The next part drops soon. I had some trouble getting it the way I wanted it, but the next part should be smooth sailing. Well, I always hope that, but this time for sure.